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A hiker is about to hike down the mountain and head back to his cabin when he hears a hypnotic song played on a flute in the distance.
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Soooo I’m going skiing with my mother this week. So far it’s been very fun, but as soon as we arrived in the mountains, the atmosphere made me feel compelled to write a yeti TF! Sooo: here it is!
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Soooo I’m going skiing with my mother this week. So far it’s been very fun, but as soon as we arrived in the mountains, the atmosphere made me feel compelled to write a yeti TF! Sooo: here it is!
Thumbnail art is by hero forge. Hero forge is not responsible for the contents of this story
Category Story / Transformation
Species Primate (Other)
Size 120 x 114px
File Size 43.5 kB
Ca Ching! Now that’s how you begin a story. What you have to aim for.
“As he did this” is a forced narrator interjection and type of phase to avoid as it screws with tense and tells. Everything around it accomplishes it’s job without it.
But yes great start and good story
But
Good story.
“As he did this” is a forced narrator interjection and type of phase to avoid as it screws with tense and tells. Everything around it accomplishes it’s job without it.
But yes great start and good story
But
Good story.
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