When you are Forced to Start Over Chapter One
First chapters can be hard, and I tried a different structure with this one compared to my other stories. I originally planned on this just being a one shot but kind of fell in love with the characters. So, if people like it, I will happily continue this story while I continue to break out what I want to happen in my other stories.
As always comments mean the world to me and help me get an idea of what people like.
As always comments mean the world to me and help me get an idea of what people like.
Category Story / Baby fur
Species Feline (Other)
Size 120 x 120px
File Size 75.4 kB
I really like the story so far going through his day at daycare and Eliot acting small was very cute and also was cute when he got embarrassed, it’s nice that Chloe can tell Eliot needs some extra help and pushes him to do activities and not hide in his corner. Henry seems like a good friend helping him and trying to figure out how to take care of his friend.
I really can’t wait to read more if you continue 😸
I really can’t wait to read more if you continue 😸
I'm really enjoying the story so far. Coincidentally, I was searching for a story that takes place in a Day Care setting, and yours just came at the right time. I personally prefer wholesome stories, and I'm glad to see that it turned out to be one. It's also lovely to hear that you plan on continuing the story instead of making it a one shot.
I will be looking forward to the next Chapter. Keep up the good work.
I will be looking forward to the next Chapter. Keep up the good work.
Off to a good start.
I had figured (and confirmed by one reply I saw) that Moon Scouts was evidence of this being in the same universe as When You Break Free.
I notice a few other parallels between this story and that as well. But I haven’t had a chance to dive into your other stories so I don’t know how they compare in that regard.
In any case, I’m definitely looking forward to more of this story!
I had figured (and confirmed by one reply I saw) that Moon Scouts was evidence of this being in the same universe as When You Break Free.
I notice a few other parallels between this story and that as well. But I haven’t had a chance to dive into your other stories so I don’t know how they compare in that regard.
In any case, I’m definitely looking forward to more of this story!
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