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Galleon: Furry fantasy adventure comic!
NOW AVAILABLE IN TECHNO-TONES AT
Http://www.ArkWorldGalleon.com
Chapter 1
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Haschen: Male Bunny
Class: Monk
(Working name Puppy):Female Puppy
Class: Thief
NOW AVAILABLE IN TECHNO-TONES AT
Http://www.ArkWorldGalleon.com
Chapter 1
(Page 8/9 of 28)
<<< PREV | FIRST | NEXT >>>
SPLASH PAGE!!! >> Airships are SOOO COOOL, but man are they hard to draw.
Haschen: Male Bunny
Class: Monk
(Working name Puppy):Female Puppy
Class: Thief
Category Artwork (Traditional) / Comics
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 1131 x 802px
File Size 188 kB
Hopefully it'll be pretty much continuous. it'll have its own site for the finished version.
The whole comic is a colab with another writer for his setting. I want to have as much cameo action from friends who are interested in being in the comic as i can once its established >w<
Especially for anyone who has gotten to play the game that goes with the setting~
The whole comic is a colab with another writer for his setting. I want to have as much cameo action from friends who are interested in being in the comic as i can once its established >w<
Especially for anyone who has gotten to play the game that goes with the setting~
I LOVE YOUR AIR SHIP HOLY HELL XD
now i remember you asking for creitque at the begining of the story so i will throw my two cents in as a fellow comic artist.
i am very impressed with ur paneling and the art but the story doesn't seem to pop out at me yet, i find that if u have a catchy intro fans keep up and want to know more, right now u seem to be lossly tossing out bits of information and its confusing me. Im not saying thats bad, and im sure within the next 10 pages everything will be clear, just something to think about in the future <3
i cant wait for the next page =3
now i remember you asking for creitque at the begining of the story so i will throw my two cents in as a fellow comic artist.
i am very impressed with ur paneling and the art but the story doesn't seem to pop out at me yet, i find that if u have a catchy intro fans keep up and want to know more, right now u seem to be lossly tossing out bits of information and its confusing me. Im not saying thats bad, and im sure within the next 10 pages everything will be clear, just something to think about in the future <3
i cant wait for the next page =3
maybe have a hint of what that guy was suppose to go after in the beginning be a prologue page, or maybe make a prologue page of a wanted poster with the ppl on the ship? something that will help add suspense and hint at what the comic will be about. i did that with TTWG with the March Hare rambleing off a proficy that had to do with the entire comic
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