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I read through the descriptions again and here are the ones that stuck out to me (forgive me if I sound snobbish; I did technical writing at my last job, and it left some residue on my psyche whenever I read anything):
In Sudarsini's description: "...and loving wife to both Sinh 'and' the lioness, Jinga".
"...the disciplinarian of the relationship with a bit of 'a' playful sadistic streak" or, "a playfully sadistic streak".
In Azeza's description: "Born on and raised on..." reads a bit smoother as "Born and raised on".
The word "arrangemetn" is most likely intended to be "arrangement".
"...and has some to appreciate" was probably intended to be "and has come to appreciate".
Jangal's description: "...hybrid offspring of father" might read better as "hybrid offspring of a father"
"Generaly" to "generally".
"Along side" is one word - alongside.
In Sudarsini's description: "...and loving wife to both Sinh 'and' the lioness, Jinga".
"...the disciplinarian of the relationship with a bit of 'a' playful sadistic streak" or, "a playfully sadistic streak".
In Azeza's description: "Born on and raised on..." reads a bit smoother as "Born and raised on".
The word "arrangemetn" is most likely intended to be "arrangement".
"...and has some to appreciate" was probably intended to be "and has come to appreciate".
Jangal's description: "...hybrid offspring of father" might read better as "hybrid offspring of a father"
"Generaly" to "generally".
"Along side" is one word - alongside.
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