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yes
This is just about right
I'd say a tad bit girlier but it looks just right o/

yeah i don't know really how to make a guy like this look girlie and demony ^^;

Haha, it's fine, he's coming out fine as is :>

ok updated incubus (refresh)

i think i got the face to be more effeminate.

Definitely more effeminate, and it looks great :>
That's definitely what I was looking for in this

excellent, now did you wanna push his package in any particular direction? Figuratively or literally?

I got a chuckle out of that xD
Outwards a bit in the literal sense, being an incubus he's got to be carrying something around worth showing off after all.

Indded.

i know it'd be cool as sin to see these two look like legit Diagea characters. But i will help that a great deal more to just get these designs down before locking into a strickter visual rule set.

Agreed. I'd be willing to buy another two linearts later once they're complete to see them in the disgaea style once the designs are set in stone. :>

And that'd just be for the character designs. Not even talking about the other fun
I'm definitly gonna hafta go and load up those sketches tonight.

You bring up another good point, the xxx'ing must follow oh yes
it must

I SEE WHAT YOU DID HERE

SNEAKY SNEAKY

Ok check this out (refresh)
I'm not sure how I feel about the gloves, I knda wanted to do a back and forth pattern but you get the idea

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faaaaaaaaaaabulous

I actually like how the gloves came out, they have a unique flair to them :>

I love the face.
I remembered at the last second to add the face markings

I'm also thinking to add the same pattern to the horns.

But listen, decision time.
I can go ahead and refine the lines for both these pieces
or
I can leave them like they are right now and we can talk about your next projects
or
you can tell me how close you are to ordering your next set and what they are, that way I can plan my time accordingly.
these 2 commissions went REALLY frikkin fast! I'm totally surprised myself

I'd say go ahead and refine them now, because while I'd like to discuss the next projects immediately I don't want to get ahead of myself and I want to make sure everything summer/fall related for college is in order before I start buying anything else.

right-o

here's him with more of that pattern detail. I MAY have gone a teeny weeny bit overboard

A tiny bit, but it looks awesome

Incubus complete

Yessss
Delicious, awesome /o/
Thanks for all your hard work, I really appreciate it :>

Man you REALLY gotta get these two colored!

Without a doubt, without a doubt. The coloring will happen, oh yes.
And so will adult images revolving around a certain Sinner.

Check it out, rough colors

Whoaaaa
These look amazing

That's right. I also need color reference for him.

damn! These are some awesome lines!

i know right? I was a bit dissappointed by the color scheme he ended up with though