Five long years after a brutal war for the planet Earth, two human recruits cross paths as they prepare to train and become charges in the United Treaty Organization's military.
A story set in the UTO verse, originally created by
hetzer
Special thanks to
teedash for handling editing, and to
turbocanuck for helping with character writing.
Read the mobile-friendly version here: https://www.sofurry.com/view/2235288
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A story set in the UTO verse, originally created by
hetzerSpecial thanks to
teedash for handling editing, and to
turbocanuck for helping with character writing.Read the mobile-friendly version here: https://www.sofurry.com/view/2235288
<<< PREV | FIRST | NEXT >>>
Category Story / Macro / Micro
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 120 x 120px
File Size 118.1 kB
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This was incredibly well written. A lot of sci-fi writers have difficulty balancing the wonders of the world they're describing with the flow of the story, but you've managed to capture that balance in a way that was a true joy in both regards. I genuinely felt sad when I attempted to scroll down, only to realise that I had just finished reading the final page.
I look forward to seeing where you take Em, Nolan, and Zhylara Thae’Mirr.
I look forward to seeing where you take Em, Nolan, and Zhylara Thae’Mirr.
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