Shock and Amazement! Another story!

And believe it or not, this one was done back in February. I was just waiting for someone to give it a look-over and it took this long to do. Ah well. As you can probably guess from the title, this story is a continuation from Unforseen Changes, so I suggest you go read that one first or you might be a little confused.

As stated before, the Paradise setting and all related stories may be found at http://shifti.org/wiki/Paradise_%28Setting%29