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SUMMARY: 'Red Sentience' is the sequel to 'Blue Glow'. It strives to answer the question of, 'When the party is over, then what?' The consequences of getting everything you want, coupled with those of time-travel, are explored herein. It picks up where 'Blue Glow' left off with the protagonist, Cody Carrington, now 30 years old and re-assessing where his life is going.
LENGTH: ~130 pages, 12 point font, Word Document format
RATING: PG-13. There is mild, non-descriptive breastfeeding and diaper usage. Additionally, none of this is sexualized. There is also some adult language.
All comments appreciated! :)
N.B.: A huge thank you to
akastus who provided me with endless support and invaluable assistance with proofreading; you are the best little bro in the world ;) Also, a thank you goes out to Foley, who helped offer some crucial plot-related advise. Finally, but not leastly, thanks to all the wonderful readers on FA; your comments on 'Blue Glow' are what helped push me to complete this chapter. Thank you!
Thank you for taking a peak and I hope you enjoy reading it as much as I did writing it!
LENGTH: ~130 pages, 12 point font, Word Document format
RATING: PG-13. There is mild, non-descriptive breastfeeding and diaper usage. Additionally, none of this is sexualized. There is also some adult language.
All comments appreciated! :)
N.B.: A huge thank you to
akastus who provided me with endless support and invaluable assistance with proofreading; you are the best little bro in the world ;) Also, a thank you goes out to Foley, who helped offer some crucial plot-related advise. Finally, but not leastly, thanks to all the wonderful readers on FA; your comments on 'Blue Glow' are what helped push me to complete this chapter. Thank you!Thank you for taking a peak and I hope you enjoy reading it as much as I did writing it!
Category Story / Baby fur
Species Vulpine (Other)
Size 120 x 120px
File Size 470.5 kB
very good job, it reminded me of when i was at school and couldn't make head or tail of anything, this has become my new fav book (blue glow was it before) beacuse it reminds me of a time, even though it was hell for me, that everyone should enjoy, if blue mist (my book) comes out half as good as this i will be happy
It seems kind of weird, I know of course there is a meaning behind the story, and it can differ from person to person but it of course left me with a feeling of a little despair. Just as Blue Glow did, this leaves me with a lot of self reflection about some of my own feelings about life. Very well written, and I still recommend just as much as Blue Glow, jus be prepared to sniffle a bit!
Hmm...I just dont know what to think yet. Im still a bit shaken from the story yesterday. And from personal reflection, I think it affected me more because of my mother no longer being around if you catch my drift. So really, both stories sort of brought the effect on, the sequel was still saddening though.
Again, your writing is just incredible. I'll be honest, the story left be feeling like I'd been hit in the side of the head with a brick. But then, I guess that's one of the emotions to be expected after reading such a touching piece. A very, very thought-provoking piece of fiction, to be sure.
I have to admit though, I really do hope that your next piece is a little more cheery!
I have to admit though, I really do hope that your next piece is a little more cheery!
I have to say I'm mighty impressed by the quality of writing. Blue Glow was fantastic, but this was in a different league. It wrenches you back and forth before hitting you with a thought provoking and difficult ending. Even if I have to wait months for the final part of his trilogy I will be a very happy man.
Great job!
Great job!
Having spent around 9-10 hours straight just re-reading blue glow and red sentience on a day off, I can say confidently that you are without a doubt one of my favorite writers. For me to spend that kind of time during a rare dare off of being an infantryman in the us army, is something that people would consider me crazy for. Your writing though has such a deeper feeling to it, that really I cannot express with words. It's given me moments of thought and searching myself, and I just need to say thank you, for it's things like being able to just escape into a world like this for a short time, that is keeping me sane in this ridiculous line of work.
Looking forward to part 3 mate.
Looking forward to part 3 mate.
And I just want to thank you for putting your life on the line to protect the freedoms that allow me to write and express my thoughts freely. :)
I am indeed flattered and very touched over the extensive time you spent with my writings. I hope part three doesn't disappoint! ^_^
I am indeed flattered and very touched over the extensive time you spent with my writings. I hope part three doesn't disappoint! ^_^
your a spectacular writer though im dyslexic an visually impaired it takes me longer than normal to read your story was well written spectacularly descriptive and even made me cry at the end. thank you so much for sharing your story it kept me up just wanting to read on to find out what happened next. ofcourse its 3 am now i need to sleep an due to the hr i cannot conceive all the words i wish to portray on divulge of the mood an many other things this story provided though i did somehow notice a misspelling or two and being my writing skills cannot for the life of me figure out how i saw them i just wanted to mention that there are a few sadly i cannot recall where.
once again thank you for sharing
once again thank you for sharing
I love it!!! Its 4 AM and I just finished reading this and blue glow and I have to say I love all your writings but this one left me feeling sad that Cody lost everything. I still like Blue glow better then this because it made me fell happier then this one. I can not wait till the 3rd one comes out. Will its 4:32 AM I'm going to bed.
This was a definite come-down from 'Blue Glow', but fear not, Cody lives on.
You timed it well as the third and final part of the trilogy is currently being edited by my bwo and should be posted within a couple weeks. I hope it lifts your spirits. :)
Thank you for reading! ^_^
You timed it well as the third and final part of the trilogy is currently being edited by my bwo and should be posted within a couple weeks. I hope it lifts your spirits. :)
Thank you for reading! ^_^
Wow, just wow. I read blue glow last night just finished this one and honestly you are one of the BEST authors I've evern seen. The amou of emotion behind your words and the depth on the characters gives your writing a sense of soul many other writings lack. Im about to read the next installment amd all I can say is I'm looking to it with high hopes.
I'm sorry I'm Really late to the party but as a struggling college student for 3 years after the pandemic I just wanted to say that as wired as this baby fur stuff is, Blue Glow and Definitely Red sentience has made me a bit more grateful for MY life no matter how crappy it is. I Definitely empathize with Cody/Adam but I Definitely don't want to be in his shoes There are points in the story were I had to pause the TTS reader so I could deal with the grief and the anxiety of losing control for awhile before diving in again. It made me Think that if I were given the choice that Angelica gave Adam at the end of blue glow I would definitely chose to be human again not only because I would of stolen the life of a literal child but I also have this Spite against life hear that compels me to hold on and keep me moving forward its petty but it works I'm starting to read white starlight now
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