[HORROR, PENIS MUTILATION, NONCON] The Price of Predation
I recently watched the movie Teeth (which I believe is an underrated and humorous horror film, by the way) and felt that it conveys a significant lesson about consent. Inspired by this, I decided to write a story as a tribute to the film, aiming to highlight the importance of consent as well.
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Character: Jerry Reinard ©
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I figured it was a dream, but also thought it would be interesting if he found something that showed it wasn't just a dream. What if he saw something she had been wearing, maybe a necklace or bracelet, and when he picked it up he heard her voice saying 'lesson learned' as the jewelry faded away.
I really enjoy the story but I do have one question.
Was Lilith drunk in that first scene at all? or was Jerry the only one who was drunk?
I just think it's worth pointing out that she did try to seduce a man who was too drunk to consent to sex. Of course that's not condoning his actions later into the story, but it did rub me the wrong way that she gave a lecture about consent after she, herself, seduced a man who was too drunk to consent. Sorry if I'm misinterpreting the story tho! Also sorry if this is addressed in the sequels, just about to read them! :3
again, really enjoy the story, love your characters, just wanted to bring this up since I found it worth pointing out!
Was Lilith drunk in that first scene at all? or was Jerry the only one who was drunk?
I just think it's worth pointing out that she did try to seduce a man who was too drunk to consent to sex. Of course that's not condoning his actions later into the story, but it did rub me the wrong way that she gave a lecture about consent after she, herself, seduced a man who was too drunk to consent. Sorry if I'm misinterpreting the story tho! Also sorry if this is addressed in the sequels, just about to read them! :3
again, really enjoy the story, love your characters, just wanted to bring this up since I found it worth pointing out!
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