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So as I said, I am posting these chapters to FurAffinity now too. I just feel it should be shared! This first chapter is different since it is in a paged out format. The rest of the scripts are just normal, as they weren't edited to be ready for comic pages yet. Either way, I hope you enjoy!
Chapter 02
Chapter 03
Chapter 04
Chapter 05
Chapter 06
Chapter 07
Chapter 08
Chapter 09
Chapter 10
Chapter 11
Chapter 12
Chapter 13
Chapter 14
Chapter 15
Chapter 16
Chapter 17
Chapter 18
Chapter 19
Chapter 20
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Page 1
Panel 1
-View over the village as the sun is rising-
Page 2
Panel 1
-View of the house-
Panel 2
-Charles hand knocking on the door-
Panel 3
Shela: (shaking in bed)
Panel 4
-Clarissa’s face but blacked out-
Panel 5
-Medical supplies-
Panel 6
-Dirt grave-
Panel 7
Shela: (rolling over/thrashing)
Page 3
Panel 1
-More graves-
Panel 2
Shela: (jolts awake, panting slightly)
Panel 3
Charles: (Off camera) Hey lazy, wake up! Dad wants you to train with Aero soon.
Panel 4
Shela: Um okay, I’ll be out in a few.
Panel 5
Charles: Okay, see you there. (footsteps)
Shela: (staring at the door until he leaves)
Page 4
Panel 1
Shela: (buries her face in her hands) I’m really sick of that damn nightmare…
Panel 2
-Shela’s feet hitting the ground-
Panel 3
-Grabbing clothes from her closet-
Panel 4
-Other closes on the floor-
Panel 5
-Shela tying up her hair in a small mirror-
Panel 6
-Shela stepping out of the house-
Page 5
Panel 1
-Shela being greeted by other camp members-
Panel 2
-And another one-
Panel 3
-And another ANOTHER one-
Panel 4
-Training ring/pit-
Panel 5
Roy: Ah, there you are! I need you to train with Aero today please.
Panel 6
Shela: But you…
Panel 7
Roy: Your brother, Desmond, and I are heading out to the woods with a small group for training, so I need you to look after everyone here alright?
Page 6
Panel 1
Shela: (sighs) Yeah, sure, alright.
Panel 2
Roy: Thank you. (pats her head) I’ll see you in the evening.
Panel 3
Charles: Later nerd! (stick his tongue out at her)
Panel 4
(Roy, Charles, Desmond, and a small group wander away with Shela looking sad)
Panel 5
Aero: (hand on her shoulder) You okay?
Panel 6
Shela: Yeah it’s fine, c’mon we have a lot of work to do. (already walking away)
Aero: R-Right! (following her)
Page 7
Panel 1
-Shot of the forest, Roy examining a tree-
Panel 2
-Randos shrugging at each other, looking confused-
Panel 3
Roy: We’re almost there, I made the markings much less deep the farther I got.
Panel 4
Rando: Hey Chief, is there a reason you want us to train in the woods?
Panel 5
Roy: Ah yes, I guess since you weren’t living in Fox Village this doesn’t make a whole lot of sense to you.
Page 8
Panel 1
Roy: Fighting in the woods was something we specialized in since the village was surrounded by trees. Mastering it can give you a huge advantage within battles.
Panel 2
-Foot caught in root-
Panel 3
Rando: WOAH!
Panel 4
-Rando 1 crashes into another rando while Desmond rolls his eyes and Charles flinches, both groan in pain-
Panel 5
Roy: (chuckles and offers a hand)
Panel 6
Roy: See this is the perfect example. Learn how to move effectively here and you can take advantage of careless mistakes the enemy might make.
Rando: (looking up at Roys hand/him)
Page 9
Panel 1
Rando: (grabs Roy’s hand and is pulled up) Yeah that makes sense now, thanks.
Panel 2
(Desmond helping the other up in the bg)
Rando: Sooo you must have a lot of battle experience then?
Panel 3
Roy: Not as much as I think everyone expects but I have a fair amount, yes. Most of my experience simply comes from training.
Panel 4
(Show off a shot of the old village)
Roy: Since the village virtually lives on a magic deadzone, we had to learn to defend ourselves without it. Training became a huge cultural thing to us, it’s very important.
Panel 5
Rando: Wow! That’s quite a bit different from where I came from, magic was used all over the place.
Panel 6
Rando: I guess that explains why the camp feels so…low tech for lack of a better term ahah.
Charles: (glaring at him slightly)
Page 10
Panel 1
Desmond: It also makes it harder to track if we’re not radiating large amounts of magical energy and at the moment, I think we can all agree that laying low is for the best.
Other Rando: (Softly) Yeah…who knows when those Enchanted Soldiers will strike next. (looking back and forth)
Panel 2
Roy: Sadly we can’t predict that, but what we can do is focus on training.
Panel 3
Roy: Come on now, there’s a lot of work to do!
Others: Yes sir!
Panel 4
(Shela and Aero squaring off in the pit)
Page 11
Panel 1
Aero: (comes at Shela, trying to attack)
Panel 2
Shela: (side steps slightly)
Panel 3
Shela: (grabs Aero)
Panel 4
Shela: (slams him down) Not quite fast enough!
Aero: OOF!!
Page 12
Panel 1
Aero: (coughing into his hand one way, yelling the other) Geez, you don’t have to be so damn rough!
Shela: You should have learned by now! If you refuse to elarn then I refuse to take it easy on you.
Panel 2
Shela: (crouched down, surprised look)
Aero: (half sitting up, surprised look)
???: Haha uh oh, what did you do to piss her off now?
Panel 3
Shela: (quickly turning her head)
Panel 4
Shela: (disappointed look)
Panel 5
Shela: (helping Aero up) He didn’t piss me off, mind your own business Dean. (Dean can be seen in the background)
Panel 6
Dean: Hey hey relax okay, I’m here to train, I wasn’t trying to eaves drop or anything.
Page 13
Panel 1
Shela: (rolls her eyes) Do you need a sparring partner?
Panel 2
Dean: (walking over) Nah, Ash will be here in just a few.
Panel 3
Dean: Plus Aero there clearly needs th-
Panel 4
Shela: (sliding out her foot)
Panel 5
Dean: ACK! (trips)
Panel 6
Shela: (slams him down with her elbow) You were saying?
Dean: (coughing)
Page 14
Panel 1
Dean: Damn girl (cough)
Panel 2
Dean: (sitting up) That was kind of harsh don’t you think?
Panel 3
Shela: (glaring) Don’t insult someone who’s learning just like you are, dick.
Panel 4
Dean: (sighs) Fair enough (turns to look at him) Sorry Aero.
Aero: It’s cool.
Panel 5
Aero: It’s clear that neither of us are no match for her.
Panel 6
Shela: (embarrassed, turning away) More of a reason to train, let’s get back to work.
Panel 7
(Aero and Dean chuckle a bit)
Page 15
Panel 1
(Aero coming at Shela)
Panel 2
(Shela tripping him up)
Panel 3
(Aero trying to drag her down with)
Panel 4
(Shela slamming him down while Ash shows up, Dean waving)
Ash: Geez she’s not going easy on him at all today.
Panel 5
Dean: Haha, nope.
(Ash walking down to him)
Panel 6
Ash: Well likewise, I don’t plan to go easy on you today either.
Panel 7
Dean: Bring it on.
Page 16
Panel 1
(Dean launching a magic fire attack)
Panel 2
(The magic peters out before even getting to Ash)
Panel 3
Ash: You’re not putting enough in to it, these spells are weak.
Panel 4
Dean: I know but…
Panel 5
Ash: (smiling softly) You’ll do fine, I know you’re worried but it should be okay.
Panel 6
Dean: Okay…
Panel 7
(Dean calming himself)
Page 17
Panel 1
(Dean’s hands begin to glow)
Panel 2
(Glow gets brighter)
Panel 3
(Dean slammed back by the light)
Shela and Ash: DEAN!
Page 18
Panel 1
(Shela and Dean rushing over)
Panel 2
Dean: (inhaling and coughing)
Panel 3
Dean: I’m (heaves)
Panel 4
Dean: Oh (cough) Kay
Panel 5
Ash: (patting him on the back) We need to get you to the doctor…
Panel 6
Dean: No! No god, I’m fine!
Page 19
Panel 1
Shela: Dean please, just get looked over.
Panel 2
Dean: (tries to stand up)
Panel 3
Dean: (wobbles over) Hrk! (Shela catches him)
Panel 4
Dean: (Shela still holding him) Alright, fine…
Panel 5
(Shela and Ash stabilize Dean)
Panel 6
Shela: Aero, go head and head home. We’ll train overtime tomorrow to make up for cutting today short.
Panel 7
Aero: Alright, you know where to find me if you need anything.
Page 20
Panel 1
(Group splitting off)
Panel 2
(In front of the medical hut)
Panel 3
(In the entryway)
Shela: Hey, Eis? Can you take a look at Dean?
Panel 4
Eis: (appearing from around the corner) Of course, go ahead into the back room there, I’ll have a look)
Panel 5
(The two bring Dean into the room)
Panel 6
(Eis shoos them into the waiting area)
Page 21
Panel 1
(Fearful silence between the two)
Panel 2
Shela: I’m sorry that our camp is so unequipped for his problem, we can barely even handle non-magical medical issues as is.
Panel 3
Ash: Well you’ve suffered for it as well so…no need for an apology.
Panel 4
(Flashback to the grave nightmare)
Panel 5
Shela: Yeah…
Page 22
Panel 1
Shela: Anyway, I really should head back before the boys get home but please let me know how he is.
Ash: Of course.
Panel 2
(They semi-wave to each other as Shela steps out)
Panel 3
(Shela half heartedly waving to someone)
Panel 4
(Shela declining something from someone)
Panel 5
(Shela looking worried as she ignores someone)
Page 23
Panel 1
(Shela arriving home, looking sadly at it)
Panel 2
(Shela grabbing wood off the pile)
Panel 3
(Shela having made the fire, sticking skewers into the ground)
Panel 4
(Food Cooking)
Panel 5
(Food cooking but now it’s sunset)
Panel 6
(Shela looking over the camp)
Page 24
Panel 1
(Charles walking up while Shela is putting the finished food on a plate)
Panel 2
Shela: So how’d training go?
Panel 3
Charles: (smiling) Pretty well, dad’s pleased.
Panel 4
Shela: (Off Cam) Great.
Charles: (looking upset)
Panel 5
Charles: (sighs)
Panel 6
Charles: Look I tried to get him to take you but he said he needed someone to look after the others.
Panel 7
Shela: That’s always his excuse!
Page 25
Panel 1
Shela: But it’s fine, whatever. As long as we’re making progress, right?
Panel 2
Charles: Of course…
Panel 3
(Both are quiet as Shela finishes putting the remainder of the food on the plate)
Panel 4
Shela: Oh, uh…
Panel 5
Shela: Could you also try to talk dad into finding another doctor?
Charles: What happened?
Panel 6
Shela: Dean’s still having issues controlling his magic and it backfired.
Charles: Oh no…
Panel 7
Shela: I think he’s okay but it’s making me really nervous. After what happened to mom…
Page 26
Panel 1
Charles: I know. I’ll talk to him.
Shela: Thanks.
Panel 2
Roy: (walking up) Shela!
Panel 3
Roy: (closer to the house) Ash told me to let you know that Dean is doing just fine now.
Panel 4
Shela: (Smiling) Good to hear. Dinner’s ready if you two want to take it inside.
Panel 5
(Fade out of them walking inside while Shela puts out the fire)
Page 27
Panel 1
(Shela’s bedroom while she sits on the bed and brushes her hair)
Panel 2
(Shela glancing at the window)
Panel 3
(Shela near the window now, looking out)
Panel 4
(Looking at a hut with just one light on that belongs to Dean and Ash)
Panel 5
(View of the two)
Shela: (off cam, in her head) I sure hope those two really are alright…
Page 28
Panel 1
(Shela’s mother)
Shela: (in her head) If only we had more doctors…
Panel 2
(Outside of the window, looking in at Shela)
Shela: If only he’d listen to me…
Panel 3
(Zoom out of the camp at night)
Chapter 02
Chapter 03
Chapter 04
Chapter 05
Chapter 06
Chapter 07
Chapter 08
Chapter 09
Chapter 10
Chapter 11
Chapter 12
Chapter 13
Chapter 14
Chapter 15
Chapter 16
Chapter 17
Chapter 18
Chapter 19
Chapter 20
---
Page 1
Panel 1
-View over the village as the sun is rising-
Page 2
Panel 1
-View of the house-
Panel 2
-Charles hand knocking on the door-
Panel 3
Shela: (shaking in bed)
Panel 4
-Clarissa’s face but blacked out-
Panel 5
-Medical supplies-
Panel 6
-Dirt grave-
Panel 7
Shela: (rolling over/thrashing)
Page 3
Panel 1
-More graves-
Panel 2
Shela: (jolts awake, panting slightly)
Panel 3
Charles: (Off camera) Hey lazy, wake up! Dad wants you to train with Aero soon.
Panel 4
Shela: Um okay, I’ll be out in a few.
Panel 5
Charles: Okay, see you there. (footsteps)
Shela: (staring at the door until he leaves)
Page 4
Panel 1
Shela: (buries her face in her hands) I’m really sick of that damn nightmare…
Panel 2
-Shela’s feet hitting the ground-
Panel 3
-Grabbing clothes from her closet-
Panel 4
-Other closes on the floor-
Panel 5
-Shela tying up her hair in a small mirror-
Panel 6
-Shela stepping out of the house-
Page 5
Panel 1
-Shela being greeted by other camp members-
Panel 2
-And another one-
Panel 3
-And another ANOTHER one-
Panel 4
-Training ring/pit-
Panel 5
Roy: Ah, there you are! I need you to train with Aero today please.
Panel 6
Shela: But you…
Panel 7
Roy: Your brother, Desmond, and I are heading out to the woods with a small group for training, so I need you to look after everyone here alright?
Page 6
Panel 1
Shela: (sighs) Yeah, sure, alright.
Panel 2
Roy: Thank you. (pats her head) I’ll see you in the evening.
Panel 3
Charles: Later nerd! (stick his tongue out at her)
Panel 4
(Roy, Charles, Desmond, and a small group wander away with Shela looking sad)
Panel 5
Aero: (hand on her shoulder) You okay?
Panel 6
Shela: Yeah it’s fine, c’mon we have a lot of work to do. (already walking away)
Aero: R-Right! (following her)
Page 7
Panel 1
-Shot of the forest, Roy examining a tree-
Panel 2
-Randos shrugging at each other, looking confused-
Panel 3
Roy: We’re almost there, I made the markings much less deep the farther I got.
Panel 4
Rando: Hey Chief, is there a reason you want us to train in the woods?
Panel 5
Roy: Ah yes, I guess since you weren’t living in Fox Village this doesn’t make a whole lot of sense to you.
Page 8
Panel 1
Roy: Fighting in the woods was something we specialized in since the village was surrounded by trees. Mastering it can give you a huge advantage within battles.
Panel 2
-Foot caught in root-
Panel 3
Rando: WOAH!
Panel 4
-Rando 1 crashes into another rando while Desmond rolls his eyes and Charles flinches, both groan in pain-
Panel 5
Roy: (chuckles and offers a hand)
Panel 6
Roy: See this is the perfect example. Learn how to move effectively here and you can take advantage of careless mistakes the enemy might make.
Rando: (looking up at Roys hand/him)
Page 9
Panel 1
Rando: (grabs Roy’s hand and is pulled up) Yeah that makes sense now, thanks.
Panel 2
(Desmond helping the other up in the bg)
Rando: Sooo you must have a lot of battle experience then?
Panel 3
Roy: Not as much as I think everyone expects but I have a fair amount, yes. Most of my experience simply comes from training.
Panel 4
(Show off a shot of the old village)
Roy: Since the village virtually lives on a magic deadzone, we had to learn to defend ourselves without it. Training became a huge cultural thing to us, it’s very important.
Panel 5
Rando: Wow! That’s quite a bit different from where I came from, magic was used all over the place.
Panel 6
Rando: I guess that explains why the camp feels so…low tech for lack of a better term ahah.
Charles: (glaring at him slightly)
Page 10
Panel 1
Desmond: It also makes it harder to track if we’re not radiating large amounts of magical energy and at the moment, I think we can all agree that laying low is for the best.
Other Rando: (Softly) Yeah…who knows when those Enchanted Soldiers will strike next. (looking back and forth)
Panel 2
Roy: Sadly we can’t predict that, but what we can do is focus on training.
Panel 3
Roy: Come on now, there’s a lot of work to do!
Others: Yes sir!
Panel 4
(Shela and Aero squaring off in the pit)
Page 11
Panel 1
Aero: (comes at Shela, trying to attack)
Panel 2
Shela: (side steps slightly)
Panel 3
Shela: (grabs Aero)
Panel 4
Shela: (slams him down) Not quite fast enough!
Aero: OOF!!
Page 12
Panel 1
Aero: (coughing into his hand one way, yelling the other) Geez, you don’t have to be so damn rough!
Shela: You should have learned by now! If you refuse to elarn then I refuse to take it easy on you.
Panel 2
Shela: (crouched down, surprised look)
Aero: (half sitting up, surprised look)
???: Haha uh oh, what did you do to piss her off now?
Panel 3
Shela: (quickly turning her head)
Panel 4
Shela: (disappointed look)
Panel 5
Shela: (helping Aero up) He didn’t piss me off, mind your own business Dean. (Dean can be seen in the background)
Panel 6
Dean: Hey hey relax okay, I’m here to train, I wasn’t trying to eaves drop or anything.
Page 13
Panel 1
Shela: (rolls her eyes) Do you need a sparring partner?
Panel 2
Dean: (walking over) Nah, Ash will be here in just a few.
Panel 3
Dean: Plus Aero there clearly needs th-
Panel 4
Shela: (sliding out her foot)
Panel 5
Dean: ACK! (trips)
Panel 6
Shela: (slams him down with her elbow) You were saying?
Dean: (coughing)
Page 14
Panel 1
Dean: Damn girl (cough)
Panel 2
Dean: (sitting up) That was kind of harsh don’t you think?
Panel 3
Shela: (glaring) Don’t insult someone who’s learning just like you are, dick.
Panel 4
Dean: (sighs) Fair enough (turns to look at him) Sorry Aero.
Aero: It’s cool.
Panel 5
Aero: It’s clear that neither of us are no match for her.
Panel 6
Shela: (embarrassed, turning away) More of a reason to train, let’s get back to work.
Panel 7
(Aero and Dean chuckle a bit)
Page 15
Panel 1
(Aero coming at Shela)
Panel 2
(Shela tripping him up)
Panel 3
(Aero trying to drag her down with)
Panel 4
(Shela slamming him down while Ash shows up, Dean waving)
Ash: Geez she’s not going easy on him at all today.
Panel 5
Dean: Haha, nope.
(Ash walking down to him)
Panel 6
Ash: Well likewise, I don’t plan to go easy on you today either.
Panel 7
Dean: Bring it on.
Page 16
Panel 1
(Dean launching a magic fire attack)
Panel 2
(The magic peters out before even getting to Ash)
Panel 3
Ash: You’re not putting enough in to it, these spells are weak.
Panel 4
Dean: I know but…
Panel 5
Ash: (smiling softly) You’ll do fine, I know you’re worried but it should be okay.
Panel 6
Dean: Okay…
Panel 7
(Dean calming himself)
Page 17
Panel 1
(Dean’s hands begin to glow)
Panel 2
(Glow gets brighter)
Panel 3
(Dean slammed back by the light)
Shela and Ash: DEAN!
Page 18
Panel 1
(Shela and Dean rushing over)
Panel 2
Dean: (inhaling and coughing)
Panel 3
Dean: I’m (heaves)
Panel 4
Dean: Oh (cough) Kay
Panel 5
Ash: (patting him on the back) We need to get you to the doctor…
Panel 6
Dean: No! No god, I’m fine!
Page 19
Panel 1
Shela: Dean please, just get looked over.
Panel 2
Dean: (tries to stand up)
Panel 3
Dean: (wobbles over) Hrk! (Shela catches him)
Panel 4
Dean: (Shela still holding him) Alright, fine…
Panel 5
(Shela and Ash stabilize Dean)
Panel 6
Shela: Aero, go head and head home. We’ll train overtime tomorrow to make up for cutting today short.
Panel 7
Aero: Alright, you know where to find me if you need anything.
Page 20
Panel 1
(Group splitting off)
Panel 2
(In front of the medical hut)
Panel 3
(In the entryway)
Shela: Hey, Eis? Can you take a look at Dean?
Panel 4
Eis: (appearing from around the corner) Of course, go ahead into the back room there, I’ll have a look)
Panel 5
(The two bring Dean into the room)
Panel 6
(Eis shoos them into the waiting area)
Page 21
Panel 1
(Fearful silence between the two)
Panel 2
Shela: I’m sorry that our camp is so unequipped for his problem, we can barely even handle non-magical medical issues as is.
Panel 3
Ash: Well you’ve suffered for it as well so…no need for an apology.
Panel 4
(Flashback to the grave nightmare)
Panel 5
Shela: Yeah…
Page 22
Panel 1
Shela: Anyway, I really should head back before the boys get home but please let me know how he is.
Ash: Of course.
Panel 2
(They semi-wave to each other as Shela steps out)
Panel 3
(Shela half heartedly waving to someone)
Panel 4
(Shela declining something from someone)
Panel 5
(Shela looking worried as she ignores someone)
Page 23
Panel 1
(Shela arriving home, looking sadly at it)
Panel 2
(Shela grabbing wood off the pile)
Panel 3
(Shela having made the fire, sticking skewers into the ground)
Panel 4
(Food Cooking)
Panel 5
(Food cooking but now it’s sunset)
Panel 6
(Shela looking over the camp)
Page 24
Panel 1
(Charles walking up while Shela is putting the finished food on a plate)
Panel 2
Shela: So how’d training go?
Panel 3
Charles: (smiling) Pretty well, dad’s pleased.
Panel 4
Shela: (Off Cam) Great.
Charles: (looking upset)
Panel 5
Charles: (sighs)
Panel 6
Charles: Look I tried to get him to take you but he said he needed someone to look after the others.
Panel 7
Shela: That’s always his excuse!
Page 25
Panel 1
Shela: But it’s fine, whatever. As long as we’re making progress, right?
Panel 2
Charles: Of course…
Panel 3
(Both are quiet as Shela finishes putting the remainder of the food on the plate)
Panel 4
Shela: Oh, uh…
Panel 5
Shela: Could you also try to talk dad into finding another doctor?
Charles: What happened?
Panel 6
Shela: Dean’s still having issues controlling his magic and it backfired.
Charles: Oh no…
Panel 7
Shela: I think he’s okay but it’s making me really nervous. After what happened to mom…
Page 26
Panel 1
Charles: I know. I’ll talk to him.
Shela: Thanks.
Panel 2
Roy: (walking up) Shela!
Panel 3
Roy: (closer to the house) Ash told me to let you know that Dean is doing just fine now.
Panel 4
Shela: (Smiling) Good to hear. Dinner’s ready if you two want to take it inside.
Panel 5
(Fade out of them walking inside while Shela puts out the fire)
Page 27
Panel 1
(Shela’s bedroom while she sits on the bed and brushes her hair)
Panel 2
(Shela glancing at the window)
Panel 3
(Shela near the window now, looking out)
Panel 4
(Looking at a hut with just one light on that belongs to Dean and Ash)
Panel 5
(View of the two)
Shela: (off cam, in her head) I sure hope those two really are alright…
Page 28
Panel 1
(Shela’s mother)
Shela: (in her head) If only we had more doctors…
Panel 2
(Outside of the window, looking in at Shela)
Shela: If only he’d listen to me…
Panel 3
(Zoom out of the camp at night)
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