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when i wrote the first part, it felt unfinished... i still had ideas floating around. this is what happens when i talk to my mate.
The Oasis is forgotten.
Darkness overtakes; the moon is waned.
Two spirits argue; ignorant to change.
The moon progresses; illuminating the Oasis once again.
Shining emerald green; a dragon passes by.
Intrigued, the white spirit approaches; the dragon speaks.
With truth, color returns; the spirit converses.
Awstruck, the black spirit approaches; the dragon laughes.
With love, flowers bloom; the spirit sings.
Inner beauty restored; a playfull fox returns.
Quietly amused; the dragon watches.
With audience; the yellow fox dances.
The Oasis is calm...
The Oasis is forgotten.
Darkness overtakes; the moon is waned.
Two spirits argue; ignorant to change.
The moon progresses; illuminating the Oasis once again.
Shining emerald green; a dragon passes by.
Intrigued, the white spirit approaches; the dragon speaks.
With truth, color returns; the spirit converses.
Awstruck, the black spirit approaches; the dragon laughes.
With love, flowers bloom; the spirit sings.
Inner beauty restored; a playfull fox returns.
Quietly amused; the dragon watches.
With audience; the yellow fox dances.
The Oasis is calm...
Category Poetry / Abstract
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File Size 843 B
i get commented on by a good poet and all i get is interesting? /:)
hell yea! this means i might be heading in the right direction with this. its so fun to do, and it helps me vent so mutch better than drawing. ^.^
coffee for teh designist --->
:3
i wrote another one about boredom, expect to see it around soon ^.^ and i cant wait to see what else you post
hell yea! this means i might be heading in the right direction with this. its so fun to do, and it helps me vent so mutch better than drawing. ^.^
coffee for teh designist --->
:3
i wrote another one about boredom, expect to see it around soon ^.^ and i cant wait to see what else you post
i must admit i have been caught without much to say. i re-read a bit and found a couple i'd like to comment on- the ones starting with 'intrigued' and 'awestruck' stick out in the poem, but seeing the context, that might be on purpose or a happy accident. and i feel the last line would work better as 'The Oasis is settled."
poetry is wonderful... too bad many people prefer having the image thrown at their face (art) rather than to put it together themselves by imagination through finely crafted wordsmithship. rarely anyone looks at my works.
i prefer tea, thank you. more flavor, less bitter. also healthier.
i've already put up three new ones awaiting, and i await seeing yours. i've also two new ideas for poetry, i just have to figure out how to craft them properly.
what was the hidden comment below?
poetry is wonderful... too bad many people prefer having the image thrown at their face (art) rather than to put it together themselves by imagination through finely crafted wordsmithship. rarely anyone looks at my works.
i prefer tea, thank you. more flavor, less bitter. also healthier.
i've already put up three new ones awaiting, and i await seeing yours. i've also two new ideas for poetry, i just have to figure out how to craft them properly.
what was the hidden comment below?
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