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Ok i thought of writting a story of how i would love to start my Pokemon adventure, naturally with the optimal meeting and my favorite Pokemon (which are Riolu and his/her evolution Lucario). I hope the story is good i might continue with this one. im using the Heartgold map as a reference for the appearance of Pokemon and of course for locations
Pokemon is a production of Gamefreak
Jack and Rio are both my characters
Pokemon is a production of Gamefreak
Jack and Rio are both my characters
Category Story / Pokemon
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 50 x 50px
File Size 5.7 kB
The story itself is good mate, you have a solid enough plot.
If I can recommend a few things, I`d suggest not using the centre alignment, instead use the Justify alignment as it keeps your block of text looking neat.
Your pace and sentence structure are reasonable, this I imagine will improve as you write more and get a feel for what works and what doesn`t.
In short, you are on the right track and I encourage you to keep writing. I look forward to seeing what you can do in the future.
If I can recommend a few things, I`d suggest not using the centre alignment, instead use the Justify alignment as it keeps your block of text looking neat.
Your pace and sentence structure are reasonable, this I imagine will improve as you write more and get a feel for what works and what doesn`t.
In short, you are on the right track and I encourage you to keep writing. I look forward to seeing what you can do in the future.
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