Wow! I've seen lots of other pics done by other artists of these two, but this one looks like it takes the cake! D'awwwwwwwww, so touching!

And I guess I overlooked it in all the other ones (that I've seen at some point or another), but is that hair on Lucky's head? Not sure if I recall reading that, at least in any of the ones I can recall reading. Just ask, cause wondering why she has hair, if so.

Yep, that is hair. It's just a quirky thing about her, makes her look more feminine to me.

Yeah, I was going to say that, but wasn't sure if that was supposed to be something else feminine, since the breasts and maybe the eyes, as well as her body structure probably, would be enough to identify her as being feminine. But hey, I don't mind!

It's more that without it, I'd look at her and think she looked kind of bald. *shrugs*

I dont wanna be rude, just saying my feelings, i always imagined wolf with 'normal' hair, a little long, sortav just like shaggy or something, not spiked up in the air. Its different and i like it for that, but i think it just looks weird. So glad you uploaded these here thought. If you know the guy who wrote Leon:Rebirth of a Hero on AGNPH, tell me if he has a furaffinity, because i love his stories just as much as yours.

Fair enough, it's hard to get my own vision to be something that looks great to everyone else with writing and subpar art alone, although quite a few artists have managed something good. The hair is always going to be a problem, but it's come to be iconic for me and I hope it can stay that way rather than look too mainstream.

As far as the whole Leon thing goes, no idea sorry. All I know is that I'll be putting up the rest once I get covers done for them.

I just think it looks strange for me, but i think you already know i mean no offense. I cant really talk, im a horrible artist, especially when it comes to hair. I like to draw, but im never hapy with my work, and i never got trained in any way besides art class throughout 3-7th grade. Ill upload something just so you can see, maybe i could draw a cover for you, if i had a working scanner. Until then, i cant upload anything. This is a weird post, seems to personel. One last thing, i seem to only be able to draw other peoples characters, i cant come up with my own stuff without it looking warped...

Practice makes perfect, after all. Who needs formal training anyway, I wasn't taught how to write beyond high school, and that was a few years ago. I don't mind if you want to have a go at my characters, feel free to do it!

*Bangs head on table* I ready your story and was immediately hooked, your writings are amazing and the suspense after the "difficult times" chapters is killing me! keep up the grate work!

read* >_> stupid computer correcting stuff... i need to figure out how to disable that.

Glad you liked it. If you don't want to wait, there's more over on AGNPH, a link to which is on my user page. I'm just waiting on a cover for the next one before I post it on here.

sweet thx!

Nice cover art

Thanks, but Mykiio's the one that drew it.

awww it's so cute. what a lovely couple. She/he did an awesome work. Mmmmm, let me see your story :P, i'm gonna watch you right now

I hope the story lives up to your expectations!

hehehe. Maybe it took me a lot to read each chapter, because i have a lot of work T_T, but i promise you i'm gonna check every chapter. Also i'm creating a story too :P

Aww, she's cute. You two make a cute couple.

Thank you very much.

You're very welcome.

I finally finish of read all of the chapters.
I think it's a really nice story and make you want to read, personally for me I really attached to the story, I just finished reading a chapter I started on the second, it there were scenes where I laughed Honestly, or else I had a tear in my eye (for example when Lucky goes with their child on his side and Wolf's own) the fight scenes are nice but I but i tell about them a thing later. Otherwise I found funny to see the character of animated and kept their psychology.
Honestly it's really something beautiful that you made ​​us, Congratulation!
Otherwise some small details are but they're so important for the story: the battle even if they are well made ​​I find it unfortunate that Wolf easily beat his opponent (against the Toterra of Paul, against Pikachu Sacha in the league against the agent J (Gelly ^^)). That the character has its fan and he is intimately fraternize with Champion Arena is nice but have tons of fan club all the girls fall at his feet is a bit axagerate (this is purely my opinion)
Honestly I took a lot of pleasure to read Wolf's Story and speedly starting to read Wolf's Journey.
Continue to write stories like that, I really enjoy.

"Jelly" with a "J" sorry for the fault ^^'

Thanks for reading, I'm glad that I managed to make it an interesting story!

I know what you mean with the whole seemingly too good thing, though when I wrote it I was thinking in terms of the fact that Wolf has only ever had those six pokemon, and training them consistently over the whole time they've been together would result in much stronger pokemon. Or at least that's how I try to justify it, I'll still admit to the fault. I think it starts to get better with that as the series goes on, but I need fresh eyes to tell me that to be sure.

I hope the rest of the series is just as enjoyable though!

I started to read the second story and this is incredible but i'll comment it when I will finish
And when you said "Wolf has only ever had those six pokemon" I had not thought about that that true you win a point.
Anyway this does not diminish the fact that the story is excellent.

The guy reminds me of Vergil from Devil May Cry III http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OgGp.....eature=related

i cant read the next one >.<

How come? What exactly is the issue?

i click on the first chapter and appear the message "You are not allowed to view this image."

Check your settings to make sure you're allowed to view adult content. That sounds like the issue here.

i didnt know i could do that >.<

btw lookout more fav incoming D:

So, now i have read this Story a second Time (first time was on AGNPH in the Old Days) and i like it the same as to this Time.
Now i have loadet all chapters from your Second Story and will read it next.
So i will go on to the Point you are now. ^^
I love compleated Storys.

Awesome, I'm glad you're enjoying it. ^^

I was looking for this, gave up, and was surprised when I found part of the series while looking for images of Mew killing/seriously injuring Arceus. (seriously, I believe Mew deserves to be god, not Arceus) Now, to start reading this when I get the chance...

Interesting search. Well, I'm happy that you found it. ^^