This is like, minimal.


The synth needs to be more legato and not so short notes, f you know what I mean.
Also, you need a bass line for the chord changes.

Thirdly, don't make a beat line thats more than two measures.
Most trance goes
Boom chick tap chick Boom chick tap chick
Aka
Bass Drum - Hi Hat - Snare Drum - Hi Hat -Bass Drum - Hi Hat - Snare Drum - Hi Hat

It twas a test my friend... im not an expert in Trance music... I barely listen to it... only music development that I do is 15% dubstep and the rest is Death Metal

Okay, no offense, I was just trying to give some advice :)

I dont plan on making it a lot, just for something that sounds cool :P other than that, I do real metal and scream crap :D