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A bit of expansion of the growth drive this year, I wanted to make a comic with the characters.
Oren Lorenson is the POV character here, as the newest member of the party.
Still working on the script and the plot, but I think I can do a introduction bit.
I just wanted to solidify the format and style of a comic.
Oren Lorenson is the POV character here, as the newest member of the party.
Still working on the script and the plot, but I think I can do a introduction bit.
I just wanted to solidify the format and style of a comic.
Category Artwork (Digital) / Comics
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 2144 x 1488px
File Size 1.54 MB
Comic? Now I do like this quite well!
Like it very well, although it has ground to improve I shall say! Main issue is the too literal use of bicolor. I do not mind black and white, but in here it had made it difficult to see characters' details properly, as well as make it hard to discern the focus of a panel from the rest.
I know not how to change this for the better for now, so it sounds like something calling for a little experimentation.
Like it very well, although it has ground to improve I shall say! Main issue is the too literal use of bicolor. I do not mind black and white, but in here it had made it difficult to see characters' details properly, as well as make it hard to discern the focus of a panel from the rest.
I know not how to change this for the better for now, so it sounds like something calling for a little experimentation.
Gotta make mistakes to fix mistakes; it's been a long time since I've done a comic, so I kinda forget those things. But as you say, experimentation the way to go!
Thanks for mentioning this. I'll definitely plan on doing adjustments in terms of dither/shading to be less black/white. Another friend mentioned that the POV is very closed in and claustrophobic, so pulling the camera back alittle would definitely help.
Thanks for mentioning this. I'll definitely plan on doing adjustments in terms of dither/shading to be less black/white. Another friend mentioned that the POV is very closed in and claustrophobic, so pulling the camera back alittle would definitely help.
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