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OKAY! So I am posting this only in my FA so be happy!!! Wooooo!!! Well, only the sketch that is. >3> Not many people tend to help me out on DA and I ahve found atleast one person likes to try to help me by sending a note with helpful comments and stuff when i post my sketches.
Anyway! The Wispy I got from Yas that I also did another pic of, I was planning of making her a raver girl and opening my own rave dream yheeeee! xD So I was thinking of what kind of outfit to put her in. o3o This is basically what i came up with. I threW in two random references to Pokemon in it because I wanted to. Also, She already had fluffy leg warmers so why add fakes? xD
Things I would like advice on specifically:
-The skirt
-The bikini top
- proportions (considering I actually used a picture of a human as the ref for this pose so I hope I didn't screw up.)
But feel free to gimme advice on ANYTHING in this. Because I would very much <3 it! ^-^ Please leave creative comment and constructive criticism below. THANKIES!
P.S. I just realized I forgot her tail. x-x I'm so silleh sometimes. I will edit it tomorrow. To tired right now for it. <3
Anyway! The Wispy I got from Yas that I also did another pic of, I was planning of making her a raver girl and opening my own rave dream yheeeee! xD So I was thinking of what kind of outfit to put her in. o3o This is basically what i came up with. I threW in two random references to Pokemon in it because I wanted to. Also, She already had fluffy leg warmers so why add fakes? xD
Things I would like advice on specifically:
-The skirt
-The bikini top
- proportions (considering I actually used a picture of a human as the ref for this pose so I hope I didn't screw up.)
But feel free to gimme advice on ANYTHING in this. Because I would very much <3 it! ^-^ Please leave creative comment and constructive criticism below. THANKIES!
P.S. I just realized I forgot her tail. x-x I'm so silleh sometimes. I will edit it tomorrow. To tired right now for it. <3
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Hmm, the design looks really nice so far. but since you request critique, I guess I can give you a few pointers on the anatomy. c:
Everything on her looks WONDERFUL, except for her legs. I think they're a bit umm... stocky? But I know legs are often hard to draw when referencing real photos. When knees bend, depending on the model, the skin "rumples up" sometimes, and redrawing all those bumps in the skin can make your art look a little off. D:
I think you should make the legs a tad more slender. Maybe more curvy? But not too much.
Or... if you would like, I can do a redline for you? <xD
Everything on her looks WONDERFUL, except for her legs. I think they're a bit umm... stocky? But I know legs are often hard to draw when referencing real photos. When knees bend, depending on the model, the skin "rumples up" sometimes, and redrawing all those bumps in the skin can make your art look a little off. D:
I think you should make the legs a tad more slender. Maybe more curvy? But not too much.
Or... if you would like, I can do a redline for you? <xD
thankies! yhea sure post me some red lines!! xD I'm tryin' to get better at this stuff so i might could do commission work lul. just post a link of zeh red lines here so i can get eet in zeh morning as i am off to bed. xD but thankies verreh much for your input thusfar! ^-^
Okay so I get what you are saying for the legs and I'll definitely work on those because yours looked better. However, the wider hips thing is a meh because Rainbow is very very petite so i made her hips more slender on purpose. =P But thankies anyway!. As for the arm, the pose I was referencing had the arm up that high. xD <3 But I also see where you're coming from. In the end, I dun think it matters much anyway since it'll be covered by the fake dreads, so I'm just going to leave that as is too and focus mainly on the legs because I do have such a hard time with legs and hands. Hence why I chose a pose not showing the hands. xD But since this is a ref for her raver form, I had to show her legs x-x. <3 Anyway! I will work on it plus adding her tail, tonight when I return home from going to see my mum, then the doctor, then a mechanic. <3 Thank you so very very very very very very very very very very very much for helping me!!!! <3 ^-^ I hope that you would be so kind as to continue doing so in zeh future.
Thankies verreh much!!! I tried really hard on this one xD I had to collect several different raver pics in order to get an idea for everything i wanted on her. xD Her Tutu is going to be -fun-. I know I'm going to turn the opacity down on it for the coloring, but I dunno how to do the line art for it... Guess I shall figure it out as i go? xD
Yesh, that is a Master ball that my friend suggested because it's purple and I <3 purple.The other is on her wrist as a beaded wristband. <3 I got the idea from a raver on deviant art and her awesomesauce candied (aka beaded jewelry).
Yesh, that is a Master ball that my friend suggested because it's purple and I <3 purple.The other is on her wrist as a beaded wristband. <3 I got the idea from a raver on deviant art and her awesomesauce candied (aka beaded jewelry).
Hey, if you are on I need help. I am trying to come up with tail accessories and am having artists block. help? come here to watch meh! http://www.livestream.com/nekomurarandom
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