
There Rinji stood, a twist of fate bringing him face to face with the one responsible for all his suffering. His ears fell backwards as his Sharingan eyes immediately activated. At last, the day had arrived!
"So, you've come." the huge gigantically muscled rhino anthro, known as Rhint, said flatly.
Rinji was disgusted by his nonchalant demeanor. He wanted nothing more than to wipe that look right off his face along with his face itself!
"That's right, I'm here! I've pushed myself to the limits and beyond, fueled by my hatred for you! You killed my father because he was a threat to your plans! Mark my words, you bastard: Since that day, I have vowed to do one thing...to see you dead!" Rinji snarled.
A white light appeared in Rinji's left hand, a ball of lightning flickering brightly within it that was accompanied by the loud overlapping sounds of chirping birds.
Rhint stood there silently, watching Rinji as he pulled out a kunai with his other hand and assumed a fierce stance that showed he was about to attack.
"This must be that famous Chidori I've heard so much about. You must really think that weak little lightning ball of yours is going to do me in. How seriously naive of you!" Rhint goaded.
His words had the intended effect. A faint orange aura surrounded Rinji like flames as his Chidori amplified in intensity on the spot!
"Enough!"
Rinji charged at Rhint as fast as his legs could carry him. He dragged his hand near the ground, carving a small trench in it with the lightning alone; showing its destructive power. As he was upon his adversary, Rinji thrust his Chidori right at Rhint's chest. Rhint made no move to dodge or block him as the attack connected, spreading its elemental energy all around Rhint's entire body and illuminating it in a bright flickering glow!
As Rinji channeled more of his chakra into the attack, he roared loudly as he brought his kunai to bear; aiming it right at Rhint's chest, where his heart is! With the lightning weakening his otherwise tough skin, he would be able to ensure a swift kill!
"NOW DIE!!!" Rinji roared as he rammed the kunai at its intended target...
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This is a picture brilliantly done by Glu-Glu from deviantART! He captured the intended pose perfectly! I definitely wanted to have him topless in this moment. If I had any critique for this piece, it would be that I wished the Chidori was a lot brighter, like this: Click here
Aside from that, this was done so well and I am very happy with the way it turned out! Hope you enjoyed the little snippet from the story that I can't seem to get my lazy ass to work on. >.>
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glux2
"So, you've come." the huge gigantically muscled rhino anthro, known as Rhint, said flatly.
Rinji was disgusted by his nonchalant demeanor. He wanted nothing more than to wipe that look right off his face along with his face itself!
"That's right, I'm here! I've pushed myself to the limits and beyond, fueled by my hatred for you! You killed my father because he was a threat to your plans! Mark my words, you bastard: Since that day, I have vowed to do one thing...to see you dead!" Rinji snarled.
A white light appeared in Rinji's left hand, a ball of lightning flickering brightly within it that was accompanied by the loud overlapping sounds of chirping birds.
Rhint stood there silently, watching Rinji as he pulled out a kunai with his other hand and assumed a fierce stance that showed he was about to attack.
"This must be that famous Chidori I've heard so much about. You must really think that weak little lightning ball of yours is going to do me in. How seriously naive of you!" Rhint goaded.
His words had the intended effect. A faint orange aura surrounded Rinji like flames as his Chidori amplified in intensity on the spot!
"Enough!"
Rinji charged at Rhint as fast as his legs could carry him. He dragged his hand near the ground, carving a small trench in it with the lightning alone; showing its destructive power. As he was upon his adversary, Rinji thrust his Chidori right at Rhint's chest. Rhint made no move to dodge or block him as the attack connected, spreading its elemental energy all around Rhint's entire body and illuminating it in a bright flickering glow!
As Rinji channeled more of his chakra into the attack, he roared loudly as he brought his kunai to bear; aiming it right at Rhint's chest, where his heart is! With the lightning weakening his otherwise tough skin, he would be able to ensure a swift kill!
"NOW DIE!!!" Rinji roared as he rammed the kunai at its intended target...
* * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * *
This is a picture brilliantly done by Glu-Glu from deviantART! He captured the intended pose perfectly! I definitely wanted to have him topless in this moment. If I had any critique for this piece, it would be that I wished the Chidori was a lot brighter, like this: Click here
Aside from that, this was done so well and I am very happy with the way it turned out! Hope you enjoyed the little snippet from the story that I can't seem to get my lazy ass to work on. >.>
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