I like it, it is interesting and somewhat dark. Very enjoyable. A few little things I thought seemed strange though.

Around 1:45 you have a drum fill come in. The only real issue I saw with that was that the fill was using strictly bass drum to fill in some 8th notes. I would not say that is impossible, but I've not really known any drummers that use a single bass note as part of a fill. The bass is there to accent other sounds and rarely stands on its own, unless it is in 16th or higher. Doing that seems to give the drums a bit of a "fake" sound behind them

really, that was the only concern that seemed to catch me. The rest was great!

Yeah I was running it through a program which creates glitches purposely which that may be the reason for the oddity. And yes the torn samples sound fake. Because I ripped them up into pieces and placed them into a sequencer. Thank you very much for the critique though it's really nice to get some when normally no one ever does on this site :D

good pace; commendable wurk

Thank you sir