A Bird's Appetite | Chapter 11
Two chapters in a day? Who am I?
Picking up where we left off, Chuck has discovered how profitable his appetite (or lack of inhibition) can be with Wilbur's professional aid. Eager to treat his boyfriend to the romantic dinner of his dreams, and to be able to afford satisfying lunches without having to leech off Kyle's modest income, Chuck jumps in head first to see what he can earn from filling his grumbling gut on a stream.
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Picking up where we left off, Chuck has discovered how profitable his appetite (or lack of inhibition) can be with Wilbur's professional aid. Eager to treat his boyfriend to the romantic dinner of his dreams, and to be able to afford satisfying lunches without having to leech off Kyle's modest income, Chuck jumps in head first to see what he can earn from filling his grumbling gut on a stream.
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Ooh yay! Some good reading before I go to bed :3
Loved the incorporation of bird anatomy, never thought about crops before or that birds don't chew! Absolute great sense of how full Chuck got himself and the delayed effect because of the overfull crop was genius. And Kyle is so tender and caring, I love their relationship so much! Though omgg guys please just tell him...not that they have much choice now ^.^'
Loved the incorporation of bird anatomy, never thought about crops before or that birds don't chew! Absolute great sense of how full Chuck got himself and the delayed effect because of the overfull crop was genius. And Kyle is so tender and caring, I love their relationship so much! Though omgg guys please just tell him...not that they have much choice now ^.^'
Its great to be able to revisit our big ol friends here! This chapter and the last were such a treat to see showing up after such a long hiatus, and it's impressive to see we're right back to it! Poor Wilbur really is just doing his best here, I dont think anyone expected Chuck to be as good at packing it in just as much as he's really showing off lately, huh. But atleast he's helping introduce his cousin to prospective career paths because it seems that he's really not going to be fitting under the hoods of cars at this rate. Or even INSIDE them given the damage we're seeing these doughballs do to this pachyderm sized parakeet!
I love that we got the thumbnail updated now, which is only proper given how big this boy is getting. And the art included with the story is adorable as always. I dont think I've ever really seen the crop of a bird come up in art or stories, so it essentially being a sort of reserve stomach so he can really demolish all the food but still reserve space in his proper gut definitely opens up possibilities... and as far as the art goes I just want to say I found the one with Wilbur especially adorable, showing off just how sunken in his snout is between those great big cheeks.
Thank you as always for taking the time to share your work with us! It's always a pleasure
I love that we got the thumbnail updated now, which is only proper given how big this boy is getting. And the art included with the story is adorable as always. I dont think I've ever really seen the crop of a bird come up in art or stories, so it essentially being a sort of reserve stomach so he can really demolish all the food but still reserve space in his proper gut definitely opens up possibilities... and as far as the art goes I just want to say I found the one with Wilbur especially adorable, showing off just how sunken in his snout is between those great big cheeks.
Thank you as always for taking the time to share your work with us! It's always a pleasure
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