I will read this when I finish fapping. 1st

-wonders if he can penalize Volsar for making a First comment-

Doooooo iiiiiiiiiiiiit.

and I know exactly where his punishment can be served. *rubs belly*

But if I feed Volsar to you, I can't have him shrink you and shove you up his arse at a later date.

<_<

>_>

exactly

yay! i appear in another series for a moment and.... im still an annoying side character

I thought your were a sexy side character?

in my opinion i am. however im apparently portrayed as annoying

You said you would make things difficult, sorry man.

its cool, some one always has to be that guy, and i dont mind being him. it means i get attention.

plus i kne what i signed up for by volunteering

I'm sorry hun, but for what's its worth, I thought you were awesome.

its fine, and thanks. besides, i think im good at what i do. *hugs*

>“Dude, I had this horrible nightmare last night.” The Latios groaned. “I was on this plane with all of these other people. Some of them were Pokemon, some weren’t, but they were all insane. And the farting, so much farting!” Breaking into the tears, the dragon screamed at the sky. “It smelled like a dozen Skuntanks exploded at once!”

>“DEAR ARCEUS, WHAT IS WRONG WITH YOU PEOPLE? THEY’RE SHOVING A SKUNK INTO A BOTTLE!” Diamond collapsed and passed out, alone with Black as the Mawile grudgingly picked up the dishes.

LOOOOOL. Is this the start of your work and Josh's constantly referencing one another?

Also, nice one with Sagi and the Octillery. I don't think he minds those tentacles there.

No, I'm not going to refer Josh's work again. This is just payback.

and thats my skunk now *chuckles*

The Octillery was my suggestion. ^_^ *giggle* I love how Sagi wasn't mentioned again after she got ahold of him... for all we know, she was still molesting him off somewhere at the end during the elimination ceremony. Remember, every character didn't need to vote in it. ;D XD

I have to say...I don't think I'm gonna look at Octillery the same way ever again...x.x;;

...Man...I feel so loose back there now. x.x;

XDDDD <3

The idea of a girl with tentacles making a guy really loose is kinda hot actually. *giggles*

*laughing*ooh man that is too funny, but nice references to Josh's story shade, that cat probably will appreciate it when he reads. And congratz to grey for being the voulenteer for this.

I think this deserves some Avian Observations ;3

-Oh those big babies, they need to learn portion control
-Lol at Dialga offering up extra for you to work too
-heehee...sagi wearing that outfit...*daydreams and drools abit with a blush*
-Thadius...oh how his perverseness causes my ribs to hurt
-Yay for grey being in this!
-poor Joshy... hope that shaker doesnt leave to big of a bump
-LOL at Urkel ref with grey
-*giggles at your outfit*
-Awww at you and Almina....and boo for the interruption, something always has to ruin the good parts...
-Lilac still impresses me with her uses of tongue
- *is walking down the street when he see's sagi, the persim ice cream on his ice cream cone dropping as i stared in horror and interest* i know i should help...but i think this is one time i'll take a pass...that's one crazed octillery...
-wow..thats alot of kecleon...
-poor kotetsu...he was just trying to be nice
-XD yes volsar is right, whould we mark Diamonds non-complaining work action on a calender?

All in all, amazing episode Shade! this was a really good read and your getting much deeper into the characters, can't wait for the next one!

Excellent Job, Shade. I have a feeling Alexey and I are about two seconds away from ripping each others throats out, though...

Ah, luckily no one can be permenantly eliminated outside of the vote at the end, hm?

I guess you're right.

I like this story it gave me a few laughs :3

Thanks, glad you liked.

I feel so sore all over...who would've thought tentacles could reach that far inside. x.x;

I guess I'm much too kind for my own good. XD
Poor Kotetsu though, anyone could have just as easily caused that ruckus in the restaurant by picking up that wallet but he was in the wrong place at the wrong time.
Oh wells, Team Kyogre needs to kick it up a notch for the next challenge. We're gonna end this losing streak! XD

Yup, pick it up a notch, ya slackers!

Ah, yes, The Apprenticeship; how I always enjoy this day! It's usually a long wait, but it's always worth it! Sorry I didn't reply sooner, Shade. I know it sounds weird, but whenever I get a new video game, or movie, or something like that...I tend to wait a day or so before I play it, since I bask in the glory of HAVING it and I think happily about what I'm in for before I actually play it. You see what I mean? Same with stories; when I see a new story, I tend to wait until the time is right for me to read...hard for me to explain how my mind works. Anyway, I'll shut up and just make comments while I read...

1. I find it kinda funny that you usually start with some kind of problem that Shade's team or the legendaries have and it leads into the story. That's actually very clever; it's just like a lot of shows that you see on TV, and that's awesome! Well done...even though I still find it hard to believe how a Zekrom, female or not, could be so mellow and kind.

2. Volsar using everyone as a pet...so classic; he's such a lazy-ass Abra! Aemi shouldn't trust him, but then again, no one in the world should trust him and some probably do, so what can ya do? *snickers*

3. Wow...Josh gets a special little hole all to himself to spy on the ladies...which leads to the life lesson for all us guys: Be careful what you wish for & women are scary! *shivers* Still, those four on Josh's team are quite sexy; Silenrea is a very hot Latias, Alexey is just naturally beautiful, Lilac is sexy in her own way, and Amelia is very cute.

4. Ha...nice one, Shade; nice references to my story. Very clever; I love it! *hugs* You really do know how to make me laugh!

5. Oh, awesome! A restaurant challenge based on your own job? Fun! I honestly love working at restaurants with food and stuff, so this is awesome! Very, very clever! *hugs*

6. Shade...that's really the first time in a LONG time that I have honestly laughed OUT LOUD! The part with Aemi and Thadius...oh my God, I was laughing hard...and I NEVER laugh out loud, especially to just myself and my cat! I have a strong feeling that you were trying to indicate that that's what YOU have to put up with every day at your own job...I feel for you, but...THAT was funny!

7. Uh...Grey honestly wouldn't be THAT annoying...in fact, he probably wouldn't be at all. Sure, he's "annoying" in the sense that he loves to stuff his nose into whatever butt he sees...but that's about it. He's really a nice guy otherwise. Still, like it or not, he's getting a huge ass-spanking for making a fool out of Josh! *growls*

8. Okay...this is seriously awesome. First Nate somehow thinks he has a shot to take on the great Alexey, and Silenrea has to play "Mommy" again. Then, an Octillery (of which instantly made me think of a certain person) shows up as a bum and does things to Sagi that scars him for life; that is WICKED! Oh man, this one is SO funny! Shade, you're a freaking genius!

9. Kali is SO cute; she's a brat and she eats too much, but she's really adorable. Wow, though...who knew that she was rich? *chuckles* Saved by the Kali, it seems.

10. Okay...if you made me laugh before...you just made me laugh out loud AGAIN! The Kecleon part...oh dear God, PRICELESS! How in the world did you come up with that? That was gold right there! I nearly laughed right out of my chair! That was SO awesome; well done, Shade, well done!

11. And...indeed, Kotetsu went...and by Aemi's mouth...very good way to go. I loved how you made him be the one, though; it wasn't exactly his fault, but it was still an amazingly funny and clever way to make him voted off. Really awesome job!

This is probably your best episode, really, since...like I said...it's the first one I've openly laughed at. It was SO awesome. I loved the restaurant challenge, I loved Aemi losing her temper (as she usually does, hehe), I loved Grey (even though he was a bit out of character), I loved the Kecleon part, and all the parts with Shade trying to woo Almina was adorable. Shade, congratulations, I have no criticism or comments to add this time; you wrote a GREAT episode. Well done.

Oh, but...maybe put page numbers on the pages next time? xD

and i loved you too Josh <3
wait... spanking? what did i do this time?

1. Can't have a solution without presenting the problem first.
2. Nate and Sagi ARE Volsar's pets. :- P
3. Yes, but if Josh is ever discovered, I doubt either of those four will go easy on him.
4. Payback, bizznitch.
5. You've held a job, you lazy lazy bum?
6. That's never actually happened to me yet.
7. Grey was actually one of my favorite parts, even though I seem to have upset him.
8. The Octillery is one of Wayc's characters, apparently. I just had too good of a mental image to pass it up. And you never know, Nate could get lucky.

im not upset at all. im actually glad i was used, and im more than happy to stop in and give others a hard time. i just have never been portrayed that way before is all. sorry if i sounded like i was complaining or mad. its your story and i gave you permission to use me so i have no right to complain any way. *hugs and tries to feed you Josh*

*knees Grey in the stomach for trying to feed him to Josh*

*falls down and curls into the fetal position* bad idea. so... much... pain.....

*growls and hmphs before patting Grey on the head*

i sorries... *gives you a cup cake* better?

I hit the wrong button. It's too early in the morning.

9. *Shrug* It takes a lot of money to convince someone to allow you to commit multiple counts of vore-related disappearance.
10. You've never played a Pokemon Mystery Dungeon game, have you? Those Kecleons are NOT something you fuck with.
11. He is a fuzzy little throat warmer.

1. So very true.
2. Yeah, I know they are...just saying that Volsar would probably use EVERYONE as a pet if he had the chance.
3. Oh, you don't need to tell me THAT...yeah, I can imagine; something tells me that that might just happen in the future, too.
4. Hehe, is that what you call payback? I honestly found it as an honor for you to make a reference or two; thanks very much!
5. I can't hold a job, because a job isn't something that you can physically hold. *laughs*
6. Oh...well...still, your job IS taxing and annoying and stressful, though.
7. Well, that's true; Grey is always really fun to play with. Oh, but don't worry; he's not upset.
8. One of his characters? Oh...didn't know that; seems like someone he would have, though.
9. So very, very true.
10. Oh, believe me, I know; even WITH my cheat codes, I STILL have massive trouble with those stupid Kecleon! Man they're annoying!
11. Yep, and now he's a fuzzy STOMACH warmer!

I -do- like Dark :)

I take it Dark is yours?

thats quite an awesome character you have there :)
i grew fond of him very fast.

mask? I wasnt aware of a physical difference between him and a normal absol. this is good to know as I had planned on doing fanart of the story sometime :)

how do you have him built?

Then what did you mean by 'the ask i gave him'?
i took that to mean theres something different about him

is the mask actually cloth or is it just the coloration of his fur around his muzzle?

in that case it may or may not get drawn on depending if i remember it or not XD
he is a cutie though :)

I may just steal it too. afterall, i seem to have developed 'pick up' as a new ability XD
and he shouldnt be covering up such a cute face ;)

Yup, I think she does too.

Whats sad here is that I've done waitressing before and I've had people like that. Though it's amazing what you can do with the computer's menu list to shave dollars off. Getting creative is essential. That and IRL I wouldn't get penalized for kicking him out. It's sexual harassment :P

Unfortunately, the Salamence’s order as a Mightyena walked up behind the Meowth and clapped him heavily on the back. I think this sentence got away from you a little, sweety.

ooooh god oh god oh god. Friends at the restaurant. Make it fucking impossible to serve anything >_<

Kudos on the Steve ref, though Steve would have been more adorably innocent about it ;)
But that could just be my personal perversion speaking there.
Yes, people! I said it. I admit it. I like the little annoying nerd to the point of inappropriateness. Happy?

That mean you delivered looks fucking amazing o_o
Im hungry now...

Heh, working in the kitchen IS kinda fun. Certainly beats the customers, and you get to play with the grill :)
We used to have water fights in the summer with the spray bottles we used to clean the grill :) The supervisor would come in back and we would all be working like nothing happened, yet we're all dripping wet XD
Was classic.

lol you really should keep that 'spontaneous ability' on me. Would be awesome to randomly scoop up things like the klepto I really am, and not even realize im doing it XD

I know, that's why I asked for volunteers! Very embarassed about that sentence... ><;;; And yes, I know you're a damn klepto. XD

Honestly, the ending pissed me off. Though more of an In character kind of pissed off. This would be one of the times Volsar would be at the TDVT depicted level of pissed off. Ko did nothing wrong. It was 100% the fucking kecleons fault, and Volsar would have stormed in there and argued it. Hell after this verdict, Volsar would hunt down those fucking idiots and eat every last one of them. He would also be miffed at shade for a while for accepting such a stupid deal to settle it.

other then that it was good. A few funny bits. I am sorry if it doesn't seem like I like it. I did, just I get angry sometimes when I read about unfair bullshit. Just means you got me emotionally invested in the story.

Don't worry, perhaps you could avenge Kotetsu and have a huge meal at the same time. XD

My thoughts exactly

Well, I'll take it as a compliment that you were emotionally involved. ^^;;

I was hoping you would take it that way.

Oh god, I hate you shade. I bloody freakin' hate you for writing this episode.

Here I am, almost about to make a breakthrough on the stubborn part of my episode that I just can't figure out where to go on, and you have to write this? Now I have competition! GOOD competition, no less! Gaaaaaaah~

in case you couldn't tell, loved this, definitely worth the wait. :D

Favorite quote: "Excuse me; I think I need a new waiter. Mine is unconscious."

Though how the hell did I get knocked out by a friggin' lick? Even if it was a Pound, I still have type resistance and a high physical defense, a crit from an attack with that low of a base power still isn't gonna beat all that. <_<

unless you consider Choice Band, STAB (for pound), and perhaps a Belly Drum beforehand. Then maybe. <_< but still.

I was a little surpised by that too, but then I thought. "A tongue that is used for that much vore would be harder then Josh's cock when he spies on the girl's showering." So I figured it made sense.

....crap. Steel-type attack would do double instead of half-damage. At least that would also take away the STAB... but yeah. That'll do it, especially with Belly Drum.

...Volsar really has a way with words, does he not? *mutters to self* Also, you're on a breakthrough with your series...so to speak? Way to go! Don't give up; I'm sure you'll get through the tough part. You're smart and clever, just like Shade; you can do it!

Hey, I'd love to bash him in the head, but you have to admit, the metaphor has some ground to stand on :P

-///////-;;;; Watch it, sweetheart, before I have to show you the power of...uh...okay, never mind. But, still, watch yourself! Good luck on your story, though. Trust me, the first one is always the hardest, but once you struggle through it and finish it, the rest will slowly start to flow. You can do it.

I know what you mean. I invented an antagonist, btw! :D

Oh, did you? Well, that's awesome! I can't wait to see who it is~

made up charry :P but I might make him an Adoptable after the series :P

Hmm...interesting...very interesting... *pretends to stroke a fake pointed beard while speaking in a strange voice* xD

Actually, you're the one who suggested Hammer Arm, which is a Fighting type, I believe? Which would be a four time weakness... Oh, and Lickitung does learn it through breeding.

Well that's just... damn. D:

I am loving reading all these comments. XDDDD

*wiggles* heee i did a good job, even though i do feel a lil guilty ^..^; but how can one deny one so cute as Kali, especially knowing how big her appetite is ^..^; also nice lil ref to TDVT X3 and given how galen was getting fairly comfy in palki, makes ya wonder if she'll want to leave. At least in there she can read her mags in peace.

Glad ya liked it. Lucas is a character I luvs.

Awww ^..^ *blushes* thankies

Yaaaaay, had a rather miserable day. I'm looking forward to this. ^^ <333

~ Almina's such a precious cutie. :D

~ Oooh, is Josh sneaking off to that thing he found several chapters ago? :O

~ Haha, noooope. Peeping tom. x3

~ All the motherfucking farts on the motherfucking plane? XD

~ Gotta love that resourceful Nikki, making oatmeal out of fruit she gathered! ^^

~ YAAAY! Momma's Diner... Pokemon edition! Hehehe.

~ BAHAHA, THADIUS!

~ Haha, are people really this annoying about the sides where you work? =3

~ Urkel the Mightyena. XD

~ *giggles at Aemi's comment about you flirting like a dork before collapsing* Quite an attitude she has.

~ Wooooahhhh... Lilac. Hehehe. KOing Alexy. :O

~ OCTILLERY!!! AHAHAHAHA... oh golly. This part's going to be fun to read. XD

~ Awww, she really IS cute. ^~^ Awwww, Sagi!!! How sweet <333 D'awww... she seems like the type of girl I'd fall for, myself. x3 How absofrickindorable. TENTACLES <333 I'm reminded of my favorite scene in Galaxy Quest. ;D

~ O____O Kali wants to eat the customers? Hahaha... woooow... she seemed rather innocent and sweet at the very outset. Your talent for personality in the characters you write, and for twists is showing again! ^^

~ She ate a whole family... haha... niiiiiice. x3 <3 All these girls are my kind of girls. *giggles* Still crushing hard on the Octillery though. *blush*

~ Random Kecleon diner stampede after Kotetsu picked up a wallet? AHAHA... wtf. Such zaniness! XP

~ Wait, so Dialga is getting reimbursed for the damage AND claiming Team Kyogre's tips as compensation? Isn't that the same thing? Seems a bit unfair if only because I thought both teams' tips would be used to feed our poor contestants. Hehe. =)

~ Awww, poor Kotetsu. It's sad to think he was being a good Samaritan, looking for ID in the wallet and not trying to steal money and he will probably be voted off. *hugs him*

***

Eeeeeee, that was such a great read. All the guest characters were phenomenal and it was fun to see all the ones we know and love be frustrated but make the best of their situations. ^^ I'm already kind of hoping for some sort of reunion episode after this is all over... but way too early to start thinking about that. I just kind of love how we're kind of a family. I've gotten used to them.

I have to admit... I'm really glad that you didn't turn Inkari into calamari. SHE WAS CUUUUUTE!!!! <333 I would have totally opened the window and fed her too and been thrilled about slimy tentacles in places I didn't know existed. *giggle* That really made my day and I'm totally fanboying over her right now. I hope I dream about her.

Lilac showed a bit of a brutal side today... knocking Alexey out! :O She's not afraid to get involved when things are getting out of control. Passive usually, but knows how to take control. I like that in a girl. I think I like just about anything in a girl... as long as she's a Pokemon. Same with guys. x3 Hehe.

I'm totally yammering on. I think this is my longest comment yet. I miss talking to you. :( *hug* I hope this comment made you grin and be happy and overall makes writing this story worth it. ^^ Know that the story and effort you put into it really is one of the highlights of my life as I'm adapting to an unfamiliar and stressful workplace lifestyle where I feel quite lonely and scared as I venture way out of my comfort zone every single day now. Thanks for making me smile. ^~^_^~^ <333 Every smile I cause and receive is like a precious gem to me.

I knows, I love Zekrom so much. Even moreso when I gave it Almina's characteristics.

Not sure how much Lilac would have to peek at...

Aemi is awesome, and hey, Alexey said she wanted to see Lilac use her tongue in a Hammer Arm attack...

Kali is strange. Very strange. I would only expect her to go into a restaurant and eat everything BUT the food.

Play PMD. For the love of god, don't fucking steal from Kecleon.

Kali paid Lucas more than enough to feed both teams. >.>;

I'm glad you liked it, I tried but I think I made Grey a bit sad. And no, I would never let harm befall a guest character... except Thadius maybe. I think Lilac should have a brutal side, she's just generally too calm to do anything. And thank you for your comments, I do so love your feedback. *Hugs*

Eating food too is nice, if there's room...

Oh yes, I forgot to comment when I read this. Sorry about that.
I give out nice tips for special service, don't I? I thought it was cute how I could figure out who really deserved the tip that time, and who would be left out. Of course, due to antics at the end, it didn't really matter that much... oh well.

I needed something with Kotetsu and his Pickup was perfect. Plus it was a good twist ending.