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DISCLAIMER: The story contains, Bullying, maybe a bit of rasism against the protagonist, Mistreadment and Depression. If you don’t feel comfortable to read it, then you don’t have to read it
This is the first time writing a story like that, about a serious topic. I am not sure if its an interesting story our not or if the story telling is good or the general Language of it, becuase usually I write stories in German, so its the first time writing one in English. I am not sure yet If the story is good enough to write more of it, but If you want to see more of it, just let me know
I was just in the mood to write a story
(Sorry of there are any spelling mistakes or grammar mistakes)
This is the first time writing a story like that, about a serious topic. I am not sure if its an interesting story our not or if the story telling is good or the general Language of it, becuase usually I write stories in German, so its the first time writing one in English. I am not sure yet If the story is good enough to write more of it, but If you want to see more of it, just let me know
I was just in the mood to write a story
(Sorry of there are any spelling mistakes or grammar mistakes)
Category Story / All
Species Coyote
Size 120 x 83px
File Size 7.3 kB
Listed in Folders
This is quite a depressing story, and it clearly is not finished, so if there is more story to tell I think you should tell it! Sure there are a few grammar mistakes, but honestly for what I am assuming is your second language it's pretty good and as an avid reader I could easily and quickly follow the narrative flow of the story. I love both reading and writing, so more of that is allows a good thing in my opinion. Would love to see where the story goes!
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