awesome poem. always great to see new stuff from you, i own a copy of BODY PROBLEM - CONCRETE POEMS and it’s awesome ^_^

thanks also no way! I'm glad you like it, leave a rating or review if you want (though you don't have to), BODY PROBLEM has sold 17 copies which is actually relatively high given that it's self published and that I don't know many people. I finished a smaller book project called Gramtan that I will be posting about soon after I get my copy from the mail and I've also been working on another book recently collecting haiku that have personal meaning to me.

i don’t really do reviews on that platform BUT i have recommended it to others :D looking forward to your next book

One of the most lovely poems I've read. The lines of "takes the shopping cart from one store to leave it in the parking lot of another" in particular got me. I love them.