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Well someone dared comment I never draw fullbodies which is.. o.o; The pose is kind of undynamic and her ass looks pointy and she feels kinda pudgy but its done so there =P z.z I may actually ink this one and not doom it to my 'undisclosed location ._.
Category Artwork (Traditional) / General Furry Art
Species Feline (Other)
Size 633 x 900px
File Size 92.3 kB
ooo, like the pose, CRIT TIME since this is still in sketch stage.
If you don't like crit ignore below block
all these left/right directions are the characters left and right.
-The left wrist is too long if the left hand is being completely encompassed by the right hand a quick remedy to this that wouldn't involve too much redrawing is to add the left thumb to not be covered up and going over that webbing gap between the thumb and index of the right hand, go ahead and try it with your hands or take a picture if you need to get it right, I hate hands.
-Also on the right hand that index finger, second joint, it's shape is as if the wrist it was holding is a flat piece of paper and it fits neatly between the skin fold in the hand, the wrist is pressing against the puffy finger skin so it should be flattened out.
-Yes butt is a little pointy like you said, rounding it out might be easier if you add some visible glute cleft where attatched to the calf.
-and now for my major crit that'll take the most work to fix, the right leg, if you focus on it you'll know somethings off a little, but now for the help, at the thighs you have them positioned like the legs are close together as touching, but at the heels they are drawn different, you need to redraw from about the knee down to fix this and make the heels touch more, and the right foot needs to point more out toward the left/background area, widening the angle between the feet directions.
If you don't like crit ignore below block
all these left/right directions are the characters left and right.
-The left wrist is too long if the left hand is being completely encompassed by the right hand a quick remedy to this that wouldn't involve too much redrawing is to add the left thumb to not be covered up and going over that webbing gap between the thumb and index of the right hand, go ahead and try it with your hands or take a picture if you need to get it right, I hate hands.
-Also on the right hand that index finger, second joint, it's shape is as if the wrist it was holding is a flat piece of paper and it fits neatly between the skin fold in the hand, the wrist is pressing against the puffy finger skin so it should be flattened out.
-Yes butt is a little pointy like you said, rounding it out might be easier if you add some visible glute cleft where attatched to the calf.
-and now for my major crit that'll take the most work to fix, the right leg, if you focus on it you'll know somethings off a little, but now for the help, at the thighs you have them positioned like the legs are close together as touching, but at the heels they are drawn different, you need to redraw from about the knee down to fix this and make the heels touch more, and the right foot needs to point more out toward the left/background area, widening the angle between the feet directions.
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