
Whew! This took a while to complete. This song means a lot to me. Wrote it a while ago, during supah tough times!! It's LOONG, and I don't plan on doing anything as long again. It took 3 days of nonstop work! I am, for once, very pleased with the results =)
Thank you to anyone who listens to it, specially to those who listen to the whole thing! It means a lot! =3
[Micro Version] = http://www.furaffinity.net/view/6255358/
[Lyrics]
The sun ain't coming
And I find myself
Still just lost inside these memories
And when it's good, well
It all hurts the same
Ill and crying to these melodies
And winter's gone and
We are on the race
Trying to find an answer, and what will be
Feels like the end but
There is still a pace
Something I don't even want to see
And I look ahead
But you're not there
And I
Always break down and cry
And maybe you left, or maybe never came
But I'll always love you all the same
I'll wait for you, I'll think about your name
Even after the rain kills the flame
But make no mistake
'cause I'm still here
And I, maybe I will survive
The rebellion inside me
Is eating into my soul
Fighting all I am and ever was
Singing songs of tomorrow
Cold and under the rain
Running towards and far away from home
With hope that someday
The wind that blows today
Will be at last warm
If I carry on the stride today
And fly far away
Maybe someday I will be okay
I'll make it pay
Hooray!
Don't feel pity
It's meant to be
But please do stay
With me
Insurrection in my heart today
It beats in pain again
Just looking for
Warmth
A billion footsteps is all I have
And the picture of an endless road
The rain keeps falling, keeps falling down
And the wind keeps giving me the chills
Warmth
A thousand miles I've looked for you
And it feels like you were never there
Oh can you hear me? Can you feel me?
I don't want to do all this alone
Warmth
And if I died, would you miss me at all?
And if I stay, will you love me?
I don't want to be alone
'Cause I don't belong
Stay
Please
Just stay
I don't want to do this alone
I love you
Stay
Please just
Stay
I love you
Thank you to anyone who listens to it, specially to those who listen to the whole thing! It means a lot! =3
[Micro Version] = http://www.furaffinity.net/view/6255358/
[Lyrics]
The sun ain't coming
And I find myself
Still just lost inside these memories
And when it's good, well
It all hurts the same
Ill and crying to these melodies
And winter's gone and
We are on the race
Trying to find an answer, and what will be
Feels like the end but
There is still a pace
Something I don't even want to see
And I look ahead
But you're not there
And I
Always break down and cry
And maybe you left, or maybe never came
But I'll always love you all the same
I'll wait for you, I'll think about your name
Even after the rain kills the flame
But make no mistake
'cause I'm still here
And I, maybe I will survive
The rebellion inside me
Is eating into my soul
Fighting all I am and ever was
Singing songs of tomorrow
Cold and under the rain
Running towards and far away from home
With hope that someday
The wind that blows today
Will be at last warm
If I carry on the stride today
And fly far away
Maybe someday I will be okay
I'll make it pay
Hooray!
Don't feel pity
It's meant to be
But please do stay
With me
Insurrection in my heart today
It beats in pain again
Just looking for
Warmth
A billion footsteps is all I have
And the picture of an endless road
The rain keeps falling, keeps falling down
And the wind keeps giving me the chills
Warmth
A thousand miles I've looked for you
And it feels like you were never there
Oh can you hear me? Can you feel me?
I don't want to do all this alone
Warmth
And if I died, would you miss me at all?
And if I stay, will you love me?
I don't want to be alone
'Cause I don't belong
Stay
Please
Just stay
I don't want to do this alone
I love you
Stay
Please just
Stay
I love you
Category Music / Rock
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 120 x 120px
File Size 8.39 MB
Wonderful work! It's great hearing the whole thing; I understand the role the guitar plays in there much better now, and it's definitely growing on me. I figured you knew what you were doing, and of course, you do. XD
The vocals sound much brighter and more confident now; it was definitely worth the trouble.
This is a flat-out great composition. It reminds me a lot of various rock/punk I've listened to, but it's very sweet, too.
Brilliant stuff.
The vocals sound much brighter and more confident now; it was definitely worth the trouble.
This is a flat-out great composition. It reminds me a lot of various rock/punk I've listened to, but it's very sweet, too.
Brilliant stuff.
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