Well it certainly sets a mood, that's for sure! >~_^<

Hopefully it's a good mood at least!

I very much appreciate you having given this a look, thanks much for that.

I wouldn't have guessed your aim was the Halloween theme, let alone a week or two before the day ^^
I must point out grammatical errors (sorry, pet peeve) You put "fiancé" when it's written with two E's for women. So, I first thought Marcus was gay, not that I hate gay people. Furthermore, put "dressed in a older-looking jacket". The error is obvious. Also, what did you intend to point out with "older-looking"?
Seeing the last paragraph, I wondered if Marcus is really a werewolf ^^

I actually just did not know that about the term fiancé/fiancée, thank you for pointing that out (was wondering why I thought there were two e's). And thank you as well for having noted I missed an 'an', feel a bit silly having missed that now. I've since updated those, very much appreciate you catching those.

As for the jacket, I was just trying to say it looks like it belongs in medieval times. Probably could have done a better job on that but I also rushed the majority of this one. As for Marcus, I was trying to hint that he is a little more than just your average neighbor.

I'm very much grateful that you would give this one a read, really means a lot.

Horror movie?
Nah.
Halloween fiction!

Nice!

Just a little something to get everyone in the spooky-holiday spirit!

Thanks much for having looked this one over, very much grateful for that.

Ah, nice ending!

I'm glad you thought so. Really means a lot that you would give this one a read, very much appreciate that.

*laughs… good ending…

Vix

I was hoping there would be some kind of peculiar twist at the end! Hope none of the kids still roaming around end up being a snack!