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Commentary:
Figuring out the speech bubbles was tricky in panels 3 and 4, but I got it to somewhat fit. Hopefully it’s readable enough. The first bubble of panel 5 was initially going to be in panel 4, but not only was there no room for it, it also just worked out better for panel 5 anyway.

The last two panels did not exist in the initial script, and it was intended to end on panel 6. I realized, however, that I should PROBABLY bring up Lubo’s recent thoughts about Rikku and have him mentally point out that Rikku’s mood can be switched seemingly at will.

Oh hey, the power that Bandit uses has been name-dropped now. Reminder that Elek is the reason Lubo and others will learn of the given names to powers, which I did not have at the start of this comic.

The uses for the “red power” that Rikku goes over have a bunch of examples from both Rikku and Lubo that the reader can find by looking back at previous pages, but I’ll try to get a list of them as best as I can.

Relevant Pages:

5-12, 14-13, 14-15, 14-19, 16-3, 18-16, 20-36, 20-37