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PATREON | COMM INFO | RedBubble | KO-FI
Fugaia Adventure - Telegram Group
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Commentary:
In my script, it was written that everyone is shown entering the room on panel one. But I decided that I should not do that because that's TEN characters at once. Instead i just made sure that any character not speaking on this page is established in at least one panel that they are now in the room.
I realized that I failed to remind the reader that Otto's job involves making and repairing clothes. It might have been a decent hint for what his surprise would be. Oh well. At least my script already had this page establish his job by implication of Auda's speech bubbles in panel 3 and also Otto's offer to Gamila in panel 5.
PATREON | COMM INFO | RedBubble | KO-FIFugaia Adventure - Telegram Group
(Ask for the discord server if you like the story)
Commentary:
In my script, it was written that everyone is shown entering the room on panel one. But I decided that I should not do that because that's TEN characters at once. Instead i just made sure that any character not speaking on this page is established in at least one panel that they are now in the room.
I realized that I failed to remind the reader that Otto's job involves making and repairing clothes. It might have been a decent hint for what his surprise would be. Oh well. At least my script already had this page establish his job by implication of Auda's speech bubbles in panel 3 and also Otto's offer to Gamila in panel 5.
Category Artwork (Digital) / Comics
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 1488 x 2105px
File Size 1.06 MB
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