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Perfect application of "message" right here, and a solid story!
Only critique I'd offer is to address all those paragraphs that begin with "I." That being said, you could counter by arguing this was a message written by someone in dire straights, and not particularly interested in how the narrative flows. And that'd be perfectly valid. :)
Only critique I'd offer is to address all those paragraphs that begin with "I." That being said, you could counter by arguing this was a message written by someone in dire straights, and not particularly interested in how the narrative flows. And that'd be perfectly valid. :)
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