It could have easily just as been:
The assassin met the boss in the penthouse. The boss was a monster gorilla of a man with demonic eyes, his own boss unknown, ordered a hit. Why Ransukin didn't know, but he had chosen his path, his life. So he said yes.
Is this style I've chosen too much?
The assassin met the boss in the penthouse. The boss was a monster gorilla of a man with demonic eyes, his own boss unknown, ordered a hit. Why Ransukin didn't know, but he had chosen his path, his life. So he said yes.
Is this style I've chosen too much?
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It's a Talisman thing. That book changed your thinking, yet not everyone has a mind for the sort of writing that takes a page to describe the presence, attire and demeanor of a character. I'm for any sort of thing that will finally end this winter of you not writing, even if not everyone likes it. That's my take anyway. It's not about where it goes, it's about *whether* it goes *anywhere*.
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