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Luna is lost once more in the darkness. When she finds herself again, she realized that there is another even more lost than she. The final dramatic chapter in which Luna solves problems, faces fears, and embarks on a new life.
The last bit of my Friendship is Magic/Heralds of Valdemar crossover. Though I have a not-really-Valdemaran sequel already in the works. :D (Edit, it's finished, "next" link goes to chapter 1.)
Cover art is from http://desktopponies.co.cc/ though the socks were added by me.
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The last bit of my Friendship is Magic/Heralds of Valdemar crossover. Though I have a not-really-Valdemaran sequel already in the works. :D (Edit, it's finished, "next" link goes to chapter 1.)
Cover art is from http://desktopponies.co.cc/ though the socks were added by me.
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Category Story / Fanart
Species Horse
Size 120 x 111px
File Size 29.4 kB
Listed in Folders
A very good little story you have. It was quite an interesting read, while being able to get a couple of chuckles and laughs out of me.
There were a few spelling/grammer mistakes in a few of the chapters, but they never distracted form the peice it self, or resulted in a re-read of the of the phrase or any confusion at all to be honest.
Overall: Very enjoyable, and I look forward to the continuation of the new story that you are writing.
There were a few spelling/grammer mistakes in a few of the chapters, but they never distracted form the peice it self, or resulted in a re-read of the of the phrase or any confusion at all to be honest.
Overall: Very enjoyable, and I look forward to the continuation of the new story that you are writing.
Lovely work. :) I really really enjoyed it! It really felt true to all the characters, such that reading it made me nostalgic for both the Valdemar books and MLP. I really love it as an exploration of Luna's character too, it really felt deep and believable. Thanks so much for sharing this!
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