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I just wanted to do a short little comic with Tassy and Stuart.
The song they are listening to is this: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ecGpDvH3IFU I wanted a reference somewhere to the swedish europop artist Robyn, because she pretty much resembles a real-life human version of Tassy, in both look, stature and personality. http://skivor.fimpens.se/artister/bilder/robyn.jpg
The song they are listening to is this: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ecGpDvH3IFU I wanted a reference somewhere to the swedish europop artist Robyn, because she pretty much resembles a real-life human version of Tassy, in both look, stature and personality. http://skivor.fimpens.se/artister/bilder/robyn.jpg
Category Artwork (Digital) / Comics
Species Housecat
Size 597 x 694px
File Size 356.2 kB
I'm glad you think the conversation works, I consider dialogue my weak point. First of all, english is not my first language, so I sometimes stumble on a phrase, not sure if it would sound good or not. Secondly, as people say, brevity is the soul of wit, and that goes doubly for a comic. However, being brief is not something I'm good at, I tend to ramble.
Whenever a certain amount of dialogue is necessary, you use as much as correctly supports the graphics in that portion of the story. Being too brief makes the dialogue incomplete. I think you did it quite well. You already have a lot of storytelling experience, and you used it to good effect here.
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