Trade done for
marijke_rose, to whome the character also belongs.
marijke_rose, to whome the character also belongs.
Category Artwork (Traditional) / Fanart
Species Cheetah
Size 691 x 1280px
File Size 126.7 kB
Well, let's see here.
Shoulders are a little too wide (for a woman in General). Marijke doesn't have spots oner her chest (though, I'll admit, this one is an easy mistake to make). And looking at it again today, those are actually the only two things I can find, LOL! Everything else looks pretty dang spot on (pardon the pun!).
What you also did great, that I'd specifically love to point out, is the skirt - that looks awesome! - And you totally got her tail right (just two rings instead of one). And I love how you have the strap on *her* left falling down so she bears a little more breast. That gives a sexy impression.
You got the markings on her face right -very good- including the shape of her nose (perfect!); plus I have to give you a package of cookies for getting her gloves right without a true reference - other's who've drawn her need to be reminded of the fact that her gloves are the same on both sides (little bit covering the underside of her palm just like it does on the back).
And Thank you much for including the top hat! (I'm constantly forgetting that lately - although, most images I'm drawing lately don't really accomodate the top hat, LOL!)
(LOL! I got that one - you did that well.)
Shoulders are a little too wide (for a woman in General). Marijke doesn't have spots oner her chest (though, I'll admit, this one is an easy mistake to make). And looking at it again today, those are actually the only two things I can find, LOL! Everything else looks pretty dang spot on (pardon the pun!).
What you also did great, that I'd specifically love to point out, is the skirt - that looks awesome! - And you totally got her tail right (just two rings instead of one). And I love how you have the strap on *her* left falling down so she bears a little more breast. That gives a sexy impression.
You got the markings on her face right -very good- including the shape of her nose (perfect!); plus I have to give you a package of cookies for getting her gloves right without a true reference - other's who've drawn her need to be reminded of the fact that her gloves are the same on both sides (little bit covering the underside of her palm just like it does on the back).
And Thank you much for including the top hat! (I'm constantly forgetting that lately - although, most images I'm drawing lately don't really accomodate the top hat, LOL!)
(LOL! I got that one - you did that well.)
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