well i think the reason why you thought it was terrible quality was that is was made when you were going through a revelation in your own life and in doing so felt that it was bad. i think you did very well in this poem you should check mine out i just started up poetry here today and i am in need of some critque and advice and inspiration... keep at it and let it keep flowing from your heart that way you can know that it will never be in a terrible quality but the truth about how you feel about what you are writing about.^_^

Thanks^^ Though I was really just bored and a little nervous for my college thing today.