hola :3

AWWWH!!! SO CUUUTE!!! <3<3

Madmax... But the rest looks awesome too. Hoyden is having cheating thoughts while being with a hot girl like Sundance? That pr!ck...(j.k.)

no cheating... he's thinking of a threesome.. XDDD

In that case: That stud!

threesome with a goddess???... thats awesome.. xDDDD especially if we talk about Luna's plot... the best plot waiting for to be explored and used... 9w9... X3...

First come, first served... *bites into Luna's plot* Explorin' and usin' that plot now!

Have you read the fan story Luna Vs Threesome? You absolutely must if you have not, it's brilliant :p https://docs.google.com/document/d/...../edit?hl=en_US

Thank you for the link! I'll read it latter today. So far the only two fanfics I've red were Mort takes a holiday (on going) and Cupcakes.
Both were recommended and both were entertaining. I hope this will be just as brilliant as those two, because, when it comes to fanfics, I'm a merciless critic!

Well in that case, I suggest you start with the first in the series: Luna Vs Microwave. The series was originally named Luna vs The World; but the name was changed to simply 'Progress.' The series is about Luna trying to get used to the social and technological changes the world has gone through in a thousand years isolation; starting with understanding the perplexities of the 'microwave oven' :p
https://docs.google.com/document/d/.....hkey=CLzoqK4J#

The story I originally linked is a UNOFFICIAL fanstory, so it is absolutely not canon with the authors stories in anyway, but is still absolutely hilarious :p

http://www.equestriadaily.com/2011/.....microwave.html Is the list of all the stories, Hoyden is introduced in story 3, as sundance's boyfriend. He definitely has...inappropriate fantasies about a threesome with Sundance and luna, but does not realize luna is in fact LUNA, since she has disguised herself as a earth pony. Hijinks enure :p



As for other stories, I recommended this one not only because its good but to clarify your comments on the sundance/Hoyden relationship. But as far as stories I recommend that are absolutely great: On a cross and arrow. http://www.equestriadaily.com/2011/.....and-arrow.html
Its one of the handful of stories that earned the elusive 6 out of 5 stars, a award that particular author has earned for multiple stories he has posted. Its a hilarious adventure where the mane 6 get transported to a alternate universe with gender switched versions of all the ponies. And 6 stallions of surprising familiarity are struggling to figure out what is going on when 6 mysterious fillies show up in ponyville and begin inadvertently causing disruption all over ponyville.
Its fascinating watching the interactions between the male and female counterparts; particularly Rainbow dash and Rainbow Blitz seeing each other as rivals, both of them so full of arrogance and pride; Rarity and Elusive falling deeply in love in a far overly dramatic fashion (We always knew rarity was in love with herself :p), and Pinky Pie and Berry Bash (Need I say more? Two pinkie pies, the horror...) :p

If I had to recommend just ONE story series to read, it is THIS one without question. Happy reading!

Thankies for the links and for the short descriptions. I will give a looksie on them and tell you my opinion on them latter.

Wow! Thank you again for the link. It was adult humor at it's best. Just the right amount of clumsiness mixed with naughtiness. The change between scenes should be more certain, but I got used to it quickly. Was truly a nice, entertaining story.

*Chuckles* I'm glad to hear you are pleased with it. I read a lot of fan fics of varying quality, and am always eager to pass on the ones I feel are higher quality. Especially the more pleasant ones; comedies, romances, adventures. Theres enough bloody, grim, dark and sad stories to get a kitten hiding in a slipper to commit suicide in the MLP fandom. I dont know WHY the show attracts so much dark fanstories around it.

I finished the Microvawe one too...Not as good as the Threesome one was, but I guess there shouldn't be adult material in the introduction of Sundance part...Okay I think it should be, but that's just my brain. The best part was, when She put a lot of effort to calculate the time, and get a ridiculously high amount as a result. I seriously chuckled at that! =XD

Bad Apple! :) Hehe, if you read the most recent one about him, you'd see that thought-bubble should be on his head. He MAY have actually... "Sealed the deal" with Luna ^.^

lack of internet... D: i saved the fic from the link you gave me last time... TwT

Awww. Glad to see you're back :)

Spike is way better off with Pinkie anyway.

..Wow. Dang, these are really well done. Seeing stuff like this makes me want to start drawing more often. >_<

Sea ponies in G4, maybe?

I know maybe two of these fics? what are they all or should I just guess?

they are based on Fanfics... and the first one is based only in a song.... actually named "Flutterpie Mix"... the point of this is to guess the fic they belong to.. :P

>Note: When a main character gets involved in situations that make it change their normal way to be... it instantly becomes an OC...

-Hum, wrong.
What 'effect' you are describing is, what is called as, being Out Of Character (OOC) : http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.p.....?from=Main.OOC

An OC, or Original Character, is this : http://www.blurtit.com/q158968.html
« 'OC' stands for original character. An original character is a character that has been created by the writer, and does not appear in the actual book. »


>it also applies when they get involved/interact with other OC ponies...

-Making a PRE-EXISTING character interact with an OC (Original Character) doesn't ''magically transform'' it into an OC... Again, there's confusion with the risk of ''being OOC''. An 'OC' and '*BEING* OOC' are 2 completely separate things.

We have to remember that pre-existing characters, or base characters if you prefer, aren't set in stone for all eternity. Base characters are partially malleable, but if their core personally is changed or alterred too much, through the writting of the author, there's risk of being OOC. While an 'OC' is, simply put, a new character created by the author to fill a role in the story.

well.. you get my point... XDDD

Damn. These are all amazing. Love the Madmax one x3 And the Trixie one. And I don't know Fizzypop, but why is she crying? D: She looks like she's supposed to be a happy pony!

YAY, Nyx, awesome

Where the heck does Tragicshy come from?

a fic called "Frienship is tragic" you can google it... ;3

Fav'd if only for Nightmare Nyx.
She so adorably

and the most easy-to-do in this one... XDDD.. glad you like her at least.. ;3

Awesome. You misspelled "Nyx" though.

actually.. I know.. Just, too lazy to open and edit the file XP...

really epic!