
Artist 
Original: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/6299648/
Type of Response wanted: Anatomy Criticism
Artist's Comments: Already know the markings I want just the anatomy stuff is giving me problems

Original: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/6299648/
Type of Response wanted: Anatomy Criticism
Artist's Comments: Already know the markings I want just the anatomy stuff is giving me problems
Category Artwork (Traditional) / General Furry Art
Species Hyena
Size 270 x 360px
File Size 7.4 kB
Digit grade legs always give problems to people. Might I suggest getting an animal anatomy book and looking at the structure of said legs. Usually helps out to have a visual reference to the real thing.
As for anatomical anomalies, the muzzleface seems... well... like to much muzzle not enough basic face. Hyenas are canine like (I know their not) and have muzzles quite similar to them. The hand also seems a bit small.
As for anatomical anomalies, the muzzleface seems... well... like to much muzzle not enough basic face. Hyenas are canine like (I know their not) and have muzzles quite similar to them. The hand also seems a bit small.
Thank you.
I will take that into consideration when I have money. Until then I'll have to go by pics from the internet. Which is what I mainly use for references
Ah yeah. The face has ben giving me problems since I started this pic. I was gonna submit this with no head but decided eff it and drew something on there very quickly. I couldn't bring myself to part with the hair/ear but the face itself has been erased since
I will take that into consideration when I have money. Until then I'll have to go by pics from the internet. Which is what I mainly use for references
Ah yeah. The face has ben giving me problems since I started this pic. I was gonna submit this with no head but decided eff it and drew something on there very quickly. I couldn't bring myself to part with the hair/ear but the face itself has been erased since
The hand and lower legs look fine to me. The hand should be 2/3rds the length of the forearm, which as far as I can tell, it is. As for the legs, well, that depends a lot on the mix of human and animal anatomy. The calves and heel may be more substantial then they would be on a digitigrade animal, but it looks fine to me.
it's hard to make out the exact pose of the hips, due to the size of the image and the blankness of the skirt, but if her hips are turned the way I think they are, the pose of her legs is reversed. A straightened leg pushes the hip up, and when it does, turning that foot outward is extremely uncomfortable.
Raising the shoulder should also lift the breast on that side, just a little.
The muzzle looks rather long. A muzzle length of about a third or quarter the overall depth of the head usually looks about right, her muzzle looks more like half.
The distance between the eyes is a little narrow, which makes her head seem smaller overall, and sort of pinches the bridge of her nose. Moving her left eye a little more to the left would fix that easily, tho.
I really like the sense of weight and ballance. She looks very well centered on her feet, and there's a distinct sense of tension in her muscles.
I could do a redline, and/or a quick sketch of changes to the pose I'm talking about, if it would help.
it's hard to make out the exact pose of the hips, due to the size of the image and the blankness of the skirt, but if her hips are turned the way I think they are, the pose of her legs is reversed. A straightened leg pushes the hip up, and when it does, turning that foot outward is extremely uncomfortable.
Raising the shoulder should also lift the breast on that side, just a little.
The muzzle looks rather long. A muzzle length of about a third or quarter the overall depth of the head usually looks about right, her muzzle looks more like half.
The distance between the eyes is a little narrow, which makes her head seem smaller overall, and sort of pinches the bridge of her nose. Moving her left eye a little more to the left would fix that easily, tho.
I really like the sense of weight and ballance. She looks very well centered on her feet, and there's a distinct sense of tension in her muscles.
I could do a redline, and/or a quick sketch of changes to the pose I'm talking about, if it would help.
Redlines would help like woah.
I'm thinking of making those shorts because I didnt wanna cover up the legs with pants the first time I drew her anthro and a skirt isn't really her style XP
Lol I had my friend do the basic boob stuff cause I can't figure out how to draw them despite having a pair :/
the only thing you didnt address that I can't figure out is the left arm. I have no idea how i want to place it cause I want it to go with the pose.
Also thank you because I can tell that you put a lot of thought into this critique :]
I'm thinking of making those shorts because I didnt wanna cover up the legs with pants the first time I drew her anthro and a skirt isn't really her style XP
Lol I had my friend do the basic boob stuff cause I can't figure out how to draw them despite having a pair :/
the only thing you didnt address that I can't figure out is the left arm. I have no idea how i want to place it cause I want it to go with the pose.
Also thank you because I can tell that you put a lot of thought into this critique :]
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