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You know you wanted to do this to someone you live.
Don't deny it.
I know she did. And She'd do it again, too.
Also, if you are a fluent speaker and see I fucked up somewhere, kindly help me. C: I'm only learning so much. ;_;
For those who don't know what was said, here's the translation:
Panel 2: "Mind if I borrow your "other" screwdriver?"
Panel 3: "Now that I have your attention... <3" "I love you, my sweet ferret."
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Character(s) © respectful owner(s).
Art is © Syrae-Universe.
Please: DO NOT USE OR ALTER. If submitted elsewhere, please cite the source.
Don't deny it.
I know she did. And She'd do it again, too.
Also, if you are a fluent speaker and see I fucked up somewhere, kindly help me. C: I'm only learning so much. ;_;
For those who don't know what was said, here's the translation:
Panel 2: "Mind if I borrow your "other" screwdriver?"
Panel 3: "Now that I have your attention... <3" "I love you, my sweet ferret."
____________________________________
Character(s) © respectful owner(s).
Art is © Syrae-Universe.
Please: DO NOT USE OR ALTER. If submitted elsewhere, please cite the source.
Category Artwork (Digital) / General Furry Art
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 1200 x 1073px
File Size 806.1 kB
First off, very cute piece. I need to try this on my mate.
Props on the German in it. I encourage further use of the language.
A few hints on the text.
"Bedenken Sie, wenn ich Ihren anderen Schraubenzieher leihe?" should be "Wuerden Sie gestatten, dass Ich Ihren anderen Schraubenzieher ausleihe." (cannot type umlauts on here, grr.
The Germans don't use the expression "to mind", their idiom is "Wuerden Sie gestatten", which means to "would you consent or permit". The coordinating conjunction should be dass and not wenn. Wenn is the subjunctive, dass is more applicable in this context. And while leihen is the correct verb to borrow, i would suggest using the prefix verb ausleihen, "to borrow from".
In the third panal the "Jetzt den" should be "Jetzt das". "Den" isan accusative definite artical, "das" is is "That".
Otherwise, awsome German. Good job on the subject-verb agrement and on the adjective endings. Those are common mistakes that are absent above. Sehr gut!
Props on the German in it. I encourage further use of the language.
A few hints on the text.
"Bedenken Sie, wenn ich Ihren anderen Schraubenzieher leihe?" should be "Wuerden Sie gestatten, dass Ich Ihren anderen Schraubenzieher ausleihe." (cannot type umlauts on here, grr.
The Germans don't use the expression "to mind", their idiom is "Wuerden Sie gestatten", which means to "would you consent or permit". The coordinating conjunction should be dass and not wenn. Wenn is the subjunctive, dass is more applicable in this context. And while leihen is the correct verb to borrow, i would suggest using the prefix verb ausleihen, "to borrow from".
In the third panal the "Jetzt den" should be "Jetzt das". "Den" isan accusative definite artical, "das" is is "That".
Otherwise, awsome German. Good job on the subject-verb agrement and on the adjective endings. Those are common mistakes that are absent above. Sehr gut!
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