Timing practice 2 CRITIQUE PLEASE! by Farel -- Fur Affinity [dot] net

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Timing practice 2 CRITIQUE PLEASE!

By Farel,
posted 14 years ago Digital Artist | Support me with Shinies!

Yes, I do keep practising, kinda pointless now, but I did. Again reminder, each character was drawn within 5 minutes. Ok one of them (forgot which) was drawn within 4:50 and two within 3:30, but overall most were drawn in an average of 4:00. Bah say what you want really!

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Shnurui ∞shnurui

Traditional Artist

14 years ago

hands tend to retain shape, I know they're hard.

the thumbs are hyper extended at the second knuckle.

The limbs further from the viewer should be shorter by perspective, making your longer back limbs even longer.

the wolf's neck seems a bit long.

OP

Digital Artist

14 years ago

oh ok, thanks for that, I'll try to note it

9-puzzle ~9-puzzle

14 years ago

The biggest thing I see is the dragon character in the top middle.

His left leg, the knee should be about under the wing (as in you draw a line down from the wing horn) so from the hip to the knee the angle should be closer to what the other leg looks like.

OP

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14 years ago

Your likely right, sorry, my bad. It's one of my main character, kinda seems like I should had gotten the hang of him earlier

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