great story, it made me laugh. do you think it'd be cool if I gave a hand and added some, you know, descriptions of the people? or you could and probably are already. like i figure that they looked like the average high school girls, but you never know, Kaitlyn could be like a massive goth, or Sammie could be tall and thin and plays for the basketball team. I'm just saying the story is great, other than a couple typos but that doesn't matter, it's just it might have been hard to picture the girls in my head the way they are in yours. I figure that you're going to do something like that later but ya, i like the story, I can't wait till it gets all fantasy too. that's gonna be sweet.

peace!
Andrugolf

Oh Kaitlyn is very very shy, the typical quiet friend, prim and proper. Sammie is kinda butch with a I'll take on anyone attitude

o ok, ya that's kewl, just remember if u happen to get writers block i'm always here to help. as long as my msn doesn't frig up on me.

peace!
Andrugolf

someone should get cursed in this, to be like, i dunno a vixen or something but with magical powers muahahaha, sorta like your fursona

I can't read the file type! *cries*
Could you possibly send in a second one in a notepad document?
You could delete it later...please?

I have a mac. I think if you download it it will open in a filetype you can read

Its looking good!
The start was very emotional. Well done.
Cant wait to read the rest of it =)

looks good so far ;) whens pt2 coming out?

I'm taking my notebook to AC with me so I can work on it. part two will come out when I have more done ^.^ At least three pages of typing is my rule

heh heh...Loved it!
I hope you add more..I was really getting into it..