REDRAW: Daisy Afterparty Comic
by Neo
iambdacore
a month ago
Redo of this post
now updated with her cooler outfit and a more horrible foreboding sense of dread!
(+ script!)
might do a coloured version
Takes place after the launch party... teehee
script text and dialogue:
PANEL 1:
Daisy enters the front door of the CDT household, announcing her presence in singsong;
{DAISY BELLE}
"♪ Callan, Tavin! ♪"
PANEL 2:
There's no reply. Daisy hesitates in the doorway.
She feels a cool draft on her ears, as the house gasps for air.
PANEL 3:
Shot of the kitchen, no one's there, its undisturbed after being cleaned this afternoon.
The flowers in the vase have started wilting.
{DAISY BELLE}
"..."
PANEL 4:
Daisy starts walking down the hallway; cupping her mouth and raising her voice.
{DAISY BELLE}
"HELLO? Where are you both?"
"Piper said she saw you leaving the party early?"
PANEL 5:
Looking at Daisy's back, she opens the sun-room's door;
{DAISY BELLE}
"No."
She peeks inside Callan's bedroom;
"No.."
Side profile, she looks in the bathroom, getting desperate.
"No, again..."
PANEL 6:
Starting to panic, Daisy sweats as she walks down the hall, ears pinned towards the floor.
She's scared, and starting to get an awful sense of deja vu.
{DAISY BELLE}
"I... I heard you both.. had an argument..."
Daisy turns her head to the left, shouting into the dead house.
"Can you two please just talk to me!?"
At this point sweat is pouring down her forehead, her heart readies itself to bolt.
PANEL 7:
Tavin's room sits at the end of the hall. The only unchecked space.
What little light there is in this hallway, it appears to be sucked into the gaps between the door of her friends room.
Daisy holds herself and glances away from the door, hoping against hope they were just standing behind her the whole time.
She clasps her hands together.
PANEL 8:
Daisy steels herself and turns to face the door, eyes wide in terror, she thinks to herself.
{DAISY BELLE}
*Please.
*Please...
Frowning and pushing open the door she thinks a prayer.
{DAISY BELLE}
*Please,
*Lillian;
*please.
now updated with her cooler outfit and a more horrible foreboding sense of dread!
(+ script!)
might do a coloured version
Takes place after the launch party... teehee
script text and dialogue:
PANEL 1:
Daisy enters the front door of the CDT household, announcing her presence in singsong;
{DAISY BELLE}
"♪ Callan, Tavin! ♪"
PANEL 2:
There's no reply. Daisy hesitates in the doorway.
She feels a cool draft on her ears, as the house gasps for air.
PANEL 3:
Shot of the kitchen, no one's there, its undisturbed after being cleaned this afternoon.
The flowers in the vase have started wilting.
{DAISY BELLE}
"..."
PANEL 4:
Daisy starts walking down the hallway; cupping her mouth and raising her voice.
{DAISY BELLE}
"HELLO? Where are you both?"
"Piper said she saw you leaving the party early?"
PANEL 5:
Looking at Daisy's back, she opens the sun-room's door;
{DAISY BELLE}
"No."
She peeks inside Callan's bedroom;
"No.."
Side profile, she looks in the bathroom, getting desperate.
"No, again..."
PANEL 6:
Starting to panic, Daisy sweats as she walks down the hall, ears pinned towards the floor.
She's scared, and starting to get an awful sense of deja vu.
{DAISY BELLE}
"I... I heard you both.. had an argument..."
Daisy turns her head to the left, shouting into the dead house.
"Can you two please just talk to me!?"
At this point sweat is pouring down her forehead, her heart readies itself to bolt.
PANEL 7:
Tavin's room sits at the end of the hall. The only unchecked space.
What little light there is in this hallway, it appears to be sucked into the gaps between the door of her friends room.
Daisy holds herself and glances away from the door, hoping against hope they were just standing behind her the whole time.
She clasps her hands together.
PANEL 8:
Daisy steels herself and turns to face the door, eyes wide in terror, she thinks to herself.
{DAISY BELLE}
*Please.
*Please...
Frowning and pushing open the door she thinks a prayer.
{DAISY BELLE}
*Please,
*Lillian;
*please.
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Neill
~neill
Love her expressions!!
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OP
thank you!! i like drawing her face alot
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