I think this mostly works. It's very thought provoking. Thank you for sharing.

*smiles... thank you Sharkie...

Vix

I'd say it's working. It's already feeling like one of your larger stories and that promises a lot of great reading ahead.

*hugs*

thank you Wire... honestly, I have no idea where it's going... we'll see...

Vix

I can see this is a continuation of the previous little story, and it's certainly blending very nicely. You can right away see where it came from (if you've read the previous story that is, of course), and it's holding a sense of things to come that could go either way. I for one would like to see where things go from here >^_^<

*smiles... thank you Fritti... I'm kind of wondering too...

Vix

Hee! Isn't that always the way the best stories end up being written? I'd say sit back, have a snack, a glass of wine, and just let your muse roam free. The best stories are always the ones where you have no idea where your muse will take you >^_^<

This certainly works for *me*. Curious to see where this goes.

*chuckles... thank you... and I'm curious too...

Vix

Good story

thanks much Werty...

Vix