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Fallout Equestria short story, part one of seven. (Written as a gift for GhastlyExists)
644 Words
Somewhere out in the Equestria wastes a private eye is hired by a grieving stallion to search for his missing wife. He's sure nothing will come of this, but who is he to deny some extra caps for easy work?
I commissioned the icon for this story from
Karcador, the high quality version of the picture is here, they've got commissions open if you like what you see.
Notes: I wrote this story just short of a year ago, in a week, as a gift. It was my very first attempt at long form writing (the total story is just under 20,000 words) and I've been planning to show it off piece by piece for awhile. I'll post a chapter every couple of days as I finish up revisions and touch ups since this was written so long ago.
Comments, thoughts, critique? Please feel free to put it in the comments, it's easier to improve if I know what to focus on. Alternatively, if you've got a request or suggestion for a short story feel free to put that in the comments or note me with it.
Part one: Prologue (You are here)
Part two: "Crazy"
Parts 3-7 coming soon.
644 Words
Somewhere out in the Equestria wastes a private eye is hired by a grieving stallion to search for his missing wife. He's sure nothing will come of this, but who is he to deny some extra caps for easy work?
I commissioned the icon for this story from
Karcador, the high quality version of the picture is here, they've got commissions open if you like what you see. Notes: I wrote this story just short of a year ago, in a week, as a gift. It was my very first attempt at long form writing (the total story is just under 20,000 words) and I've been planning to show it off piece by piece for awhile. I'll post a chapter every couple of days as I finish up revisions and touch ups since this was written so long ago.
Comments, thoughts, critique? Please feel free to put it in the comments, it's easier to improve if I know what to focus on. Alternatively, if you've got a request or suggestion for a short story feel free to put that in the comments or note me with it.
Part one: Prologue (You are here)
Part two: "Crazy"
Parts 3-7 coming soon.
Category Story / All
Species Gryphon
Size 120 x 77px
File Size 78.5 kB
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