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Feel free to critique! PLEASE!
I had some extra time today and I unpacked my tablet and messed around with the paint program GIMP and came up with this. This better displays her new markings! But I didn't feel confident enough to re-do the whole ref sheet yet :<
I have to add, roomy Raith helped a bit with the anatomy (mostly stomach, I have a habit of making my torsos short). Also I'll be watermarking my art and photo's from now on seeing as some people on facebook are posting art and pictures that do not belong to them, including some of my work :/ and I always forget to do a signature, which I should probably do along with the watermark...
So this is my second attempt ( I think) at digital art, still getting used to the sketch / ink / color process... So please critique! I know I need to work on my hands and arms A LOT. And I'll shade this later and upload for crit as well.
Also I did not name my character yet :C so if you have any suggestions shoot them my way, if I end up using the name then I'll give that person a free badge!
Character © me, kandy fosky!!!
I had some extra time today and I unpacked my tablet and messed around with the paint program GIMP and came up with this. This better displays her new markings! But I didn't feel confident enough to re-do the whole ref sheet yet :<
I have to add, roomy Raith helped a bit with the anatomy (mostly stomach, I have a habit of making my torsos short). Also I'll be watermarking my art and photo's from now on seeing as some people on facebook are posting art and pictures that do not belong to them, including some of my work :/ and I always forget to do a signature, which I should probably do along with the watermark...
So this is my second attempt ( I think) at digital art, still getting used to the sketch / ink / color process... So please critique! I know I need to work on my hands and arms A LOT. And I'll shade this later and upload for crit as well.
Also I did not name my character yet :C so if you have any suggestions shoot them my way, if I end up using the name then I'll give that person a free badge!
Character © me, kandy fosky!!!
Category All / All
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 514 x 677px
File Size 39.5 kB
sorry about taking forever with this.
I'm not going to critique colour or anything, but i think you did a fabulous job on the hind paws, and general anatomy, the lines seem to be a little "rough." perhaps you could try thickening the lines a bit in places. If you have an interest in a good program for inking, SAI works well.
the only anatomic suggestion I have, is it looks like the tail might be "up too far." think about it as your own anatomy, where your tailbone is. You wouldnt have a tail coming from the middle of your back/lower back, you'd have it down much lower. The left hind footpaw looks a little wide in the "foot" part, as well, the general footpaws, look fabulous, and the way you drew your hands/claws is just beautiful. The face, and eye positioning is good, and I see no problem with the "hair fur."
also name suggestions...
Kris
Tedrea
Va'Neir
Saa'Re
Zaali
to name a few. XD
I'm not going to critique colour or anything, but i think you did a fabulous job on the hind paws, and general anatomy, the lines seem to be a little "rough." perhaps you could try thickening the lines a bit in places. If you have an interest in a good program for inking, SAI works well.
the only anatomic suggestion I have, is it looks like the tail might be "up too far." think about it as your own anatomy, where your tailbone is. You wouldnt have a tail coming from the middle of your back/lower back, you'd have it down much lower. The left hind footpaw looks a little wide in the "foot" part, as well, the general footpaws, look fabulous, and the way you drew your hands/claws is just beautiful. The face, and eye positioning is good, and I see no problem with the "hair fur."
also name suggestions...
Kris
Tedrea
Va'Neir
Saa'Re
Zaali
to name a few. XD
Thank you :3 I'll try to work on the tail positioning a little more when I get some time to practice sketch. Those are cool name suggestions though! I'm looking for something like "dark and mysterious" but I haven't found anything that fits perfectly yet, if you have any more suggestions feel free to shoot them my way :D
Also I think the feet and lines look kinda off because I'm not used to using a tablet or working with digital art just yet, the whole layer thing is kinda confusing to me.
Also I think the feet and lines look kinda off because I'm not used to using a tablet or working with digital art just yet, the whole layer thing is kinda confusing to me.
I like it. I think it could use a background to set the atmosphere for the piece, but overall the work is very well thought out and very well drawn. The line work is excellent and the color is quite good as well. Proportions are even, and the pose is positioned good well.
A+
btw, I have a degree in Game Design so this is not just the ramblings of a husky. ^ ^
A+
btw, I have a degree in Game Design so this is not just the ramblings of a husky. ^ ^
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