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Motherly Instinct [3/3]
A good mama teaches her young by example.
You may think you're not adequate to fill that kind of role, but don't worry, every parent does at first.
Besides, your thinking days are over~
Commission for 
n4ckl3.
Posted using PostyBirb
Category Artwork (Digital) / Transformation
Species Pokemon
Size 2478 x 1487px
File Size 2.34 MB
Listed in Folders
Quite the refinement on your serperior transformations. This sequence is quite a bit more kinetic and tactile in the "feel" of the transformation compared to your previous pieces. Especially of note as the cranium shrinks bit by bit, crunch by crunch, until the naught is left but a green serpent.
If I were to offer a critique to "enhance" the other aspect of the sequence, assuming you didn't just ignore it by commissioner's request, you may wish to consider adding other tactile sensual aspects to the transformation, such as interactions with the shift in those body parts. Seeing to the focus of the genitalia as an example, perhaps you could have some form of "unbirthing" of what may have been unfertilized eggs to emphasize and encourage the change in that body part. Pressing such an opening bigger and bigger with each egg to accommodate new plumbing.
Or alternatively, focusing on the spine as it is pulled and "popped" with every stretch, maybe with something experimental like an X-Ray shot of the spine. Same with the cranium in a similar fashion, with a more detailed overlay of the muscles like in some of those medical textbooks on anatomy. It is probably a bit beyond the scope of what you wish to do with these commissions, especially seeing you need to get these out in a prompt fashion for a reasonable return to effort/reward ratio. But I think it would pay dividends to expand upon such skills in some future project of yours to better showcase your other abilities as an artist.
Hell, I think you could even pull off a short SFW comic where some other transformee turned serperior manages to keep their mind intact whilst having to learn how to use their new body, shifting to and fro with new coils and wrapping around tree branches to name one example. Different muscle memory, instincts, down to something so simple as learning how to eat again with an elongated jaw, a different diet, that sort of thing.
In any case, it is still a solid piece regardless. Definitely one of your better works as far as I have been able to observe. I hope to see more of your green noodles and other similar transformations in the future.
If I were to offer a critique to "enhance" the other aspect of the sequence, assuming you didn't just ignore it by commissioner's request, you may wish to consider adding other tactile sensual aspects to the transformation, such as interactions with the shift in those body parts. Seeing to the focus of the genitalia as an example, perhaps you could have some form of "unbirthing" of what may have been unfertilized eggs to emphasize and encourage the change in that body part. Pressing such an opening bigger and bigger with each egg to accommodate new plumbing.
Or alternatively, focusing on the spine as it is pulled and "popped" with every stretch, maybe with something experimental like an X-Ray shot of the spine. Same with the cranium in a similar fashion, with a more detailed overlay of the muscles like in some of those medical textbooks on anatomy. It is probably a bit beyond the scope of what you wish to do with these commissions, especially seeing you need to get these out in a prompt fashion for a reasonable return to effort/reward ratio. But I think it would pay dividends to expand upon such skills in some future project of yours to better showcase your other abilities as an artist.
Hell, I think you could even pull off a short SFW comic where some other transformee turned serperior manages to keep their mind intact whilst having to learn how to use their new body, shifting to and fro with new coils and wrapping around tree branches to name one example. Different muscle memory, instincts, down to something so simple as learning how to eat again with an elongated jaw, a different diet, that sort of thing.
In any case, it is still a solid piece regardless. Definitely one of your better works as far as I have been able to observe. I hope to see more of your green noodles and other similar transformations in the future.
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