Really nice job ^_^ good work on it! :)

ORB sounds somewhat like an old game I played for the PC called Inhert the Earth. But any way damn good.

Thanks ya much!

I woulda wet myself after the first 5 mins! thats a strong willed fox in an excellent story

I might have gone a bit overboard with the tickling,it was my first try.
Glad you liked it!

no such thing as too much tickling =D

Extremely true!
Glad to see you're still around, there,dudeness!

=D


Kinda been behind the scenes for a while, sorry about that ^_^

That mean old wolf should be punished for scaring Alwyn.

I might have gone a bit overboard with the tickling,it was my first try.
Glad you liked it!

you wrote like I shot a revolver my first time, dead on.

Nice job! This is really great.

I can honestly say that this is my favorite tickle story of all time. It's so cute and fun. I don't know if there will ever be another story anything like this, it can't be duplicated. I can only imagine what would happen if you took up writing another after you gained more experience and made a sequel. That wolf deserves a tickle, but maybe Alywn would take on more than he bargained for when someone else stepped in. That would be 10 times worse for him. I think there actually could have been more tickling, it's not brutal at all. It's fun. Great job!

Well, thank you. That's quite a statement. This was written some time ago and I'm much better now, though I still don't write that often.

I wouldn't expect a sequel to this, but there is another story in the making....

That sounds like something to look forward to. You have unique and unusual ideas. I really enjoy reading your stories, and I've read my share of tickle material! Thanks for the head's up, I'll give you a watch.