Still working on this guy. A huge thanks to Evenfall
http://www.furaffinity.net/user/evenfall/
She was awesome enough to help red the line the wings for xD They look so much better now. Thank you <3
This sai derping took about...idk lost count lol. Generally trying new things like texturing with shading and highlights, still have a long way to go but its getting there i think.
Critiques are always welcome <3
http://www.furaffinity.net/user/evenfall/
She was awesome enough to help red the line the wings for xD They look so much better now. Thank you <3
This sai derping took about...idk lost count lol. Generally trying new things like texturing with shading and highlights, still have a long way to go but its getting there i think.
Critiques are always welcome <3
Category Artwork (Digital) / Fantasy
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 600 x 600px
File Size 366.4 kB
It was great to doodle over your sketch XD I love how it turned out :D
BLOOOO.
Only small suggestion is maybe making the edge lines a bit thicker where the foreground parts overlap the middle/background ones. Like where the head and neck overlap that loop of the body; it sort of blends it a bit too much, so maybe make the line there a wee bit thicker?
BLOOOO.
Only small suggestion is maybe making the edge lines a bit thicker where the foreground parts overlap the middle/background ones. Like where the head and neck overlap that loop of the body; it sort of blends it a bit too much, so maybe make the line there a wee bit thicker?
Thank you <3 :D your red lines were awesomely helpful ;u;
I did a few tweaks on it already xD; (using your suggestion about the line art :D his head DOES blend in a bit) and um i don't want to keep spamming everyone with wips of the same image over and over lol xD;;; Do you mind if i pm you with another wip, with all the edits done? c:
I did a few tweaks on it already xD; (using your suggestion about the line art :D his head DOES blend in a bit) and um i don't want to keep spamming everyone with wips of the same image over and over lol xD;;; Do you mind if i pm you with another wip, with all the edits done? c:
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