At least I'm not a pizza...

Nice job! ^_^ I like it!

Great facial expression, too.

I know, it's awesome. ^^

I just got back into reading your story again, on chapter 5 of the first one. It's a clever plot, but I think it definitely shows that you're no professional and didn't have an editor. Some of the stuff is repetitive, or is stated in such a way that makes the reader feel sort of dumb. I just read the part where he goes by the changing tables in the school and after a description that the reader obviously understands to mean that the cubs get changed there, there's a single line added where Cody thinks to himself "Oh, this must be where they get changed", or something along those lines. Just seemed unnecessary, and breaks the flow of the story. Also, the random re-naming of paws and tails and such things really only confuses me, as a reader. Is there going to be a reason, or is it more "just 'cause"? I get that he's in a "new land", but there should be either more differences (e.g. COMPLETELY new characters, not just "Mickey and Minnie, but with different names"), or the world should be mostly similar, except for plot relevant points (late toilet training, people are now anthropomorphic animals, etc.).

I'll try to keep going on it, though.

Like I said, the plot's interesting and I'm only on chapter 5. I'm liking it, but it's hard to find specific things to compliment until you've read a good third or so of something at least, but fairly easy to point out places to improve.

It's certainly an original story that gets away from the repetitive plots of most babyfur/infantilist stories, and I'd recommend it on that alone.

I know it sounds like I'm harping on it, but that's just my style. Think of it this way: everything I don't say is bad is something I liked. :P

To each his own.

Awwww, how cute! ^^

Thanks. ^^

ADORABLE!