Oh wow thats so sad DX

beautiful music, you can literally FEEL the emotion in it.

Thank you very much

Comments like that make it all worth it :]

I do love your music quite much. It makes me feel things~

Oh, I bet it does.

that sposed to mean somethin', lady?

Yes :D

Lol the meaning of which, I hope to find out later. :3

While this is a good piece, I feel as if something is missing. Maybe you could put some ambient sounds.


Unfortunately, since there are downsides to this piece, and I must point them out so you can fix them or avoid them in the future. Now, I'm going to sound like an ass, but that's okay. :D

1. It's very repetitive in the middle part of the song. Have at least three or four melodies in a song like this to keep it interesting, or add a bridge.

2. All the instruments sound automated, or fake. While in some cases, this can be a sound that you want, but I don't think that's what you were shooting for in this song. If you need, I have realistic sounding pianos, guitars, bass (although not really any strings D: ) that I could send you.

I hope this was a constructive criticism!
-Nik

Thank you very much for the advice (:

No problem :3