Well, here is the second page and unlike the first page, not too many coils are shown in this image. In this second page, I intend to have dialogue between both my character and the snake, so far unnamed, and how the snake begins to use hypnosis to fight against Epoh's will. As you see with the fourth and fifth panels...there is thought boxes meant to represent their dialogue with the fox's own beginning to lessen and the background, behind the bubbles and eyes as well as Epoh's silhouette, is suppose to represent the snake brekaing deeper and deeper into Epoh's mind in order to break him down...though by the last three panels, he finds something in the fox's mind that surprises him int he 7th panel and seems to give him a rather interesting, sneaky idea by the 8th. Am going to work of dialogue...see what comes up.