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Lone Candle, page five is out at last!
In this page, we see that the mention of the name Aries Passadar has dredged up some of Liz's memories of the girl she knew so well when she was younger.
Kassandra also lays out why they're there, to discuss their final project which may even become a televised docu-drama considering the connections Jonilar, the dark-skinned student, has.
Written by me, art by the incredibly talented Egardn http://egardn4.deviantart.com/
In this page, we see that the mention of the name Aries Passadar has dredged up some of Liz's memories of the girl she knew so well when she was younger.
Kassandra also lays out why they're there, to discuss their final project which may even become a televised docu-drama considering the connections Jonilar, the dark-skinned student, has.
Written by me, art by the incredibly talented Egardn http://egardn4.deviantart.com/
Category All / All
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Size 989 x 1280px
File Size 182.9 kB
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It seems like Egardn was inspired by popular anime judging from the work he put in this. Now I should have told you in the past pages but just as a future reference, the comic should tell the readers the character's name instead of the original comment section. That way, the readers can identify the character instead of regarding the character as "Random Person #39,257." Granted the characters shouldn't break the fourth wall by introducing themselves to the readers though there are some exceptions. The ideal methods to do this is to introduce the characters with are things like caption boxes, prologue stories in the beginning pages, and even the simplest things like small talk.
Example:
Mr. X: Mr. Y, can you pass the salt please?
Mr. Y: Sure Mr. X.
Other than that, the comic is chugging along like it should.
Example:
Mr. X: Mr. Y, can you pass the salt please?
Mr. Y: Sure Mr. X.
Other than that, the comic is chugging along like it should.
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