It looks like you draw with your eraser in a black field :D I commend you! It has an awesome effect!

Kinda! I start by drawing out some black shapes, drawing with white on top, and layering B/W where it's needed. Thanks for liking! :B

I dig the B/W abstract with you play with, but man, it would have had a deeper impact if there was some soft color glows on the last frame!

Thought about it, but then I'd have to colour the whole thing to keep it from being jarring, in my opinion.. Think I should try something like that?

Hmm, I thought a very small amount of color would come off as more powerful.
In the sense that everything that is B/W is what the creature isn't paying attention to.

Much like, how the viewer will instantly want to pay more attention to the only frame with color.
Applying yourself to color all of it, sounds like you're setting yourself up for more work than you need to achieve!

Hmm, perhaps so! I'll give it a try and see if I like it. Thanks for your thoughts! :>

Tribe by Queensryche

How many points to go before I can cash them in for the sports car?

Yay! You got it. :B

99990 points to go.

I really, really like the way this came out. It looks so amazing! I love this style you use, so awesome!

Thanks Hakkuze! I'm glad other people than myself enjoy what I do. :D

Man, really like this style. Very eye-drawing, in my opinion.

Sharp contrast is probably one of my favourite things.. though I shoul explore more. ^^

Well I know the song, but I'm not going to reveal it to everyone ;B
Said it before, I'll say it again: you're absolutely brilliant Eko, I love this so much 8D

You know the song because I showed you! >8B And thanks, Fuyf. I'm happy you like it! :B

Barbie Girl, amirite? 8DD
It looks really awesome so far, you better make dat part two soon 8D

-200 points! 8D
Maybe if I'm inspired yes no we shall see if we do perhaps.

This particular style reminds me of Ursula Vernonss artstyle, espescially the one she uses in the webcomic "Digger", was that one an inspiration or did you independently dscover the style?

Her style, and Digger in particular showed me that you can get something really interesting using only sketchy B/W layering. The brush I use is also based in what I saw in her comic.. But after starting to test it out, I didn't really look more at it, trying to do my own thing; So all improvement you (may) see is all me. :B I never sought to flat-out imitate her, so I hope it isn't all too similar. Perhaps I should take it in a new direction?

I didn't want to suggest that I tohught you where copying her, the only reason I made the connection is because it is a pretty rare style, I haven't seen it much outside of digger.

As for taking it in a new direction, I think you use a bit too much of the scribbly textures, I think you should tone it down just a bit in places, focus on rendering the important details to suggest a shape rather than making a heavy scribbly approximation of the shape. As it is now, I think you become a bit too aware of the scribbles, it looks too busy in places. If you do that, then the times where you DO go all out with the scribbly details will stand out more.

Another option if you wanna keep the rather heavy scribbled style is to occasionally break the scribbles up with labyrinth- or celtic-knot type patterns, just to vry the texture in general. Youll prolly only wanna ue it for special occasions, since it's gonna require a bit of work.

In general, you need to work with contrast, either between scribbles and clean black/white lines/surfaces or between different types of textures, if you don't mind me giing some critique.

No, no! I get far too little critique, so I'm glad to have it! ^^ Your suggestions seem well thought out, and make sense, so that's a big plus.

I do think it the scribbliness of it all can get too much from a design standpoint, but my mentality is usually to copy nature, and nature is almost always scribbly, chaotic and heavilly detailed. :D You have to take time to get lost in it, noticing little things here and there, and always discovering new things in the "mess". It may not lend itself too well to comics and such, but it's very calming to work on.

I find your advice helpful, though! I think I shall try to simplify and optimize my comicstuffs for actual viewing next time. Thanks! :B

i like the last keyword 8D

but how would you do that without clothes? 8V

You should do a dozen stories like this and sell in a booklet or something :).

Maybe I'll just collect the things I do randomly anyway! x) Would be cool.